Hawkpelt's father was clan leader. He was a good leader, too, but he was too overprotective of his daughters. Hawkpelt was in love with Braveflame, the clan deputy. But she knew her father wouldn't approve of his deputy and his daughter being mates, so they had to keep it a secret. Only Hawkpelt's sister, Sunrise, knew about it. Finally, Hawkpelt couldn't take it anymore. She asked Braveflame to come run away with her. So they did. As loners, they had three kits: Flarekit, Winterkit, and Smallkit. But they missed their clan and decided to go back. Instead of being rejected like they thought they would be, they were welcomed. Mountainstar did not approve of his daughter's relationship at first, but he got used to it. And it helped him learn to trust his new deputy even more. After his nine lives were gone, Braveflame became Bravestar, leader of Cloudclan, and his daughter Flarestar after that. And for generations and generations, their family became known for their bravery and leadership. But then, that's just the way Hawks are.
Reply
Hawkpelt
8/9/2014 05:18:01 am
"And that," Finished Lionblaze, "Was the end of the Dark Forest."
Just then, Cinderheart walked in. "Lionblaze, are you scaring the kits again?" she said sternly.
"No," said Lionblaze, "I was telling them a story."
"A scary one!" Piped up Amberkit.
"It was not," protested Goldenkit. "Your just a scaredy-kit."
"Calm down, you two," said Cinderheart.
"Sorry, mother," they said in unision.
Hollykit smiled. Usually SHE was the one getting scolded. But not this time.
"Maybe it was a little bit scary," admitted the kit's father. But they deserve to know the truth."
"You couldn't wait until they were apprentices?" said Cinderheart. "They're still a little young to be told stories like THAT."
"But they-"
Lionblaze was interrupted by Bumblestripe bursting into the den.
"Did you hear?" he asked excitedly.
"Hear what?" said Hollykit.
"Hush," said Cinderheart gently. "No, Bumblestripe, what is it?"
"Dovewing's expecting kits!" he cried. MY kits!"
He rushed back out of the den before anyone could say anything.
"Well, what do you think of that?" said Cinderpelt. "There will be more kits in the nursery soon."
"I'm sure before long Ivypool will be having kits, too." said Lionblaze.
"But we'll be apprentices before then," said Goldenkit excitedly.
"Yeah," said Amberkit. "And then we'll be warriors!"
"I'm just worried about having TWO Amberpaws in the clan," said Cinderheart. "I wonder how we'll be able to tell."
Finally, the day arrived. One by one, the three kits stepped up to receive they're apprentice names.
"Amberpaw, your mentor will be Jayfeather."
"Goldenpaw, your mentor will be Icecloud."
Hollypaw watched as her brother and sister walked over to sit by they're mentors. She had known Amberpaw wanted to be a medicine cat, but she still wasn't sure why. As for Goldenpaw, he had gotten a good mentor. But who would hers be?
"Hollykit," Bramblestar's voice cracked.
Hollykit winced. She knew she'd been named after Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather's sister, who had died during the great forest battle.
"Hollykit, until you receive your warrior name you will be known as Hollypaw. I will be your mentor."
There were murmurs of surprise in the crowd of cats. Hollykit was honored. The only cats she knew of that had been mentored by the clan leader were Firestar, and Bramblestar himself, mentored BY Firestar. Was she to be part of a legacy?
She stepped forward to greet her new mentor. Cheers went up from the clan. "Amberpaw! Goldenpaw! Hollypaw!"
Many moons later...
"I am honored to be Thunderclan's new leader," began Lionstar.
"But I am greatly saddened by Squirrelstar's death."
Hollyshade listened as her father went on about how though Squirrelflight was not his true mother, he would always think of her as a mother to him.
"And now," he said, "I must choose my deputy."
"Who do you think he'll choose?" whispered Goldenfang.
"I don't know," said Hollyshade. "There's a lot of cats who deserve it."
She glanced over at Amberfall, who was sitting beside Jayfeather.
She could tell by the look on her sister's face that she was anxious to find out, too.
"After much discussion with my senior warriors and medicine cat, I have decided that Hollyshade will be my new deputy."
Hollyshade was suprised. But she followed the path up to Highledge to stand beside her father.
"Hollyshade, you have been a great mentor to Silverbird, and a great warrior to the clan. Do you accept to be the new deputy of Thunderclan?"
"Y-yes," stuttered Hollyshade.
"Cats of Thunderclan, welcome your new deputy, Hollyshade!"
Amberfall and Goldenclaw cheered. Dovewing's kits, Silverbird and Blackstripe, cheered. Ivypool's kits, Bluepaw, Elmpaw, and Eaglepaw cheered. The whole CLAN cheered. And so did the other
clans, at the next gathering. But the cat who cheered the loudest was the cat that greeted her in her dreams that night.
"Congratulations, Hollyshade," said Hollyleaf. "I'm proud of you."
Reply
Hawkpelt
8/9/2014 05:18:35 am
Crowfeather's kits
Feathertail paced the floor. "The tribe can't take them in... what will we do?"
"We'll take them to Riverclan. Say you found them. You can be their mother..."
"But they'll never know their father," she replied.
"It doesn't matter," said Crowfeather. "They'll know one of their parents, and that's the best we can do."
Crowfeather watched his unknowing kits miserably. Feathertail had died, and the other clan cats had found out about the kits. They had promised to keep the secret, but there was still nowhere for them to go.
"This is Moonkit, and this is Silverkit," he said, motioning first to the Black kit, then to the Silver-grey one.
"After our mother," said Stormfur softly.
"Yes," said Crowpaw. "That's what she wanted."
"And they're both she-cats," said Bramblclaw, watching the kits play.
"But we still don't know what to do with them," sighed Squirrelpaw. "We can't take them back to the clans, and we can't leave them with the tribe."
"Why not?" asked Stormfur.
"Because they're running low on prey," said Crowpaw. "I already asked."
"Wait," said Squirrelpaw. "I think I have an idea."
"Of course I will take care of them."
"Thank you, Midnight, this means a lot to me."
"I will watch them carefully," said the badger. "But now you must go home."
"Yes, of course."
But as the clan cats walked away, Crowpaw looked sadly over his shoulder at the kits he would never see again.
Reply
Deepclaw
9/8/2014 07:32:53 am
Deepclaw knew that he could never fall in love as a medicine cat
his littermates foxfire and hawkstone had fallen in love. sunclan was more important than that. Deepclaws mother had died when he was an apprentice and he never knew his father. Deepclaws brown pelt would never match another cats. his leader Skystar and the deputy Honeysong would find out. but he never let go of Springrose. greencough killed Springrose, Skystar, Hawkstone, and Hawkstones mate. but Deepclaw had been mates before she died and his kits were born
Reply
Honeysong
9/8/2014 01:36:36 pm
*Note: This story takes place in Future Skyclan. I myself am in Treeclan a clan located in a valley with trees that reach the sky. We are known for our sharp claws and climbing ability.*
Honeypaw stood at the top of the gorge a mere step away from the edge. She could see all the openings of the little caves where her clan mates were sleeping. She should be with them fast asleep dreaming about her upcoming assessment, but for some reason she found herself here watching over her clan.
"Honeypaw," someone called. Their voice barely a whisper.
Turning around preparing to be scolded by a warrior she ducked her head. "I know I shouldn't be up here," she said.
"Oh, Honeypaw look up," purred the cat attempting to conceal her amusement.
Honeypaw shifted her gaze from her golden paws to the white cat in front of her and let out a gasp. "Quietsong! It's been so different with you gone. I've really missed you."
"Honeypaw I'll never truly leave you. I'm gong to watch over you and protect you."
"Still it's not the same. Anyways you must need me for something if you came all the way from Starclan."
"You are right," she said all amusement gone. "You must prepare the clan."
"For what?"
"Everything you know is about to change, and Honeypaw you will be tested." With the last word Quietsong started to disappear.
"Wait! Tell me what you mean!"
Her final words were a whisper in Honeypaw's ear, "Numbers give strength but also a weakness. More may come from two. Be ready." Just as her voice disappeared completely the sun began to rise and the world around Honeypaw disappeared.
Reply
Deepclaw
9/22/2014 10:09:13 am
The three leaders
Sunclan grew stronger every day. It all started when Deepclaw was Deepkit. Yellowstar was the only leader he knew. Then the deputy Firetail died in a Moorclan raid. Soon after a badger killed Yellowstar and Skyfur became Skystar. Then when Deeppaw earned his medicine cat name Grandheart was killed in a mysterious way.
(Deepclaw killed him and he was never found MEOW >:3.) Then Honeysong became deputy. moons later Skystar died of greencough and Honeysong became Honeystar. That was the last leader Deepclaw ever knew because he died in a fight to keep his kits safe.
Reply
Honeystar
9/23/2014 10:42:07 am
*In honor of Beaversong*
The day was bright in Cheese.... no wait Caveclan, and Beaversong was about to go on patrol. He turned to Swiss..... no Swampstar who was talking to the deputy Cheddar..... no Cedarstripe.
Maybe Beaversong shouldn't go on patrol the muggy cave air must be getting to his head.
Reply
Deepclaw
9/23/2014 11:09:52 am
This is the story of when Deepclaw killed Grandheart and why
Deepclaw slipped back from the clan after the gathering. He had just seen Grandheart do the same. He followed the scent to see Grandheart standing an a log past the Rushclan borders. Then Acornfur appeared through the bushes. "Grandheart we shouldn't be here," she said. "I know I made a mistake... because Deepclaw followed me," he sadly said. Deepclaw started to think. First he left to join Rushclan. Then he came back to sunclan. NOW he still was a traitor. Rage surged through Deepclaw. He couldn't keep it caged. Then... he pounced out of the brush smashing Grandheart into a rock. blood spilled out of his mouth and cuts. Acornfur stared in horror. "Acornfur, if you say a word you will join him, your a traitor too," shouted Deepclaw. "But you will join Mellowstar in the dark forest," mumbled Acornfur. Deepclaw did the wrong thing and he knew that.
Reply
Hawkpelt
9/23/2014 09:07:02 pm
Alice was a lonely kittypet...
Someone else continue the story!
Reply
Honeystar
9/27/2014 03:47:34 am
or at least she was a kittypet. Now she lived in a house with only a dog for company because her owner had left the two of them behind.
Who's next?
Reply
Deepclaw
9/27/2014 04:02:17 am
She had loved her twolegs. But it was time to move on.
Who will continue this?
Brightflower
9/27/2014 11:31:23 am
Alice decided to leave. At moonhigh, she crept out and ran toward the forest.
Hawkpelt
9/28/2014 09:16:59 pm
Alice skidded to a stop when she heard an angry screech, and whipped around to see four angry looking cats.
Someone continue!
Reply
Brightflower
9/29/2014 12:15:41 pm
"What are you doing here?" the leader of the cats spoke.
"Uhhh......"
Someone continue!
Reply
sugarheart
9/29/2014 12:20:17 pm
well see I was just *runs away* someone continue
Honeystar
9/29/2014 01:35:27 pm
The cats chased her through the woods right to the edge of the road (thunderpath). She had no choice she needed to cross. Fast. She waited a second till the road was clear and then she ran.........
Ok next?
Sugarheart
9/29/2014 12:22:52 pm
Im doing what Bright flower did
How did you get this hurt, said the medicine cat
I was training and I saw someone... continue
Reply
Brightflower
9/29/2014 12:40:19 pm
Is this a new fanfic?
If so....
I was training and I saw someone pounce onto me and hiss, 'You'll never live another day!'
Reply
Sugarheart
9/29/2014 12:51:28 pm
Yes it is a new post we will continue this tomorrow at 5?
Brightflower
9/29/2014 12:42:01 pm
(Part of the Alice kittypet story)
I ran as fast as I could, tripping over roots and scratching my pelt in prickly bushes. Not far behind were those four cats.
Reply
Honeystar
9/29/2014 01:37:15 pm
the one I posted above is AFTER this one I just posted in the wrong place :3
Reply
Honeystar
9/29/2014 01:31:06 pm
It was just passed sun high and Treeclan's deputy, Dragonblossom, was assigning cats to patrols. Honeystar watched proudly as she gave every cat something to do, she had chosen well.
"Honeystar," Dragonblossom called.
"Yes"
"Would you mind going out with the hunting patrol? Meadowstep has a torn claw."
"Not at all. Who's going," she asked.
"Soaringwind, her apprentice, Jadepaw, Batleg and you."
"Ok I'll get everyone and we'll head out."
Batleg lead the patrol uphill towards the river to hunt while Soaringwind kept asking Jadepaw if she smelled anything.
Honeystar kept her eyes on the forest around them looking around for prey.
As they got to the river Jadepaw found a scent trail and began to follow it with Soaringwind right behind her. Batleg turned away from Honeystar muttering something about hunting over by the Big Rocks and headed in the opposite direction, so Honeystar decide that she would try her luck by the river.
Apparently she had really good luck and after a while she had a small shrew and a very fluffy squirrel. Pausing right next to the river she heard a noise. The mew of a young kit much to young to be out in the forest.
Listening closely to the sound she wove through the trees towards the poor kit. She finally found it in the alcove of a small tree wailing pitifully. Not knowing what to do she wrapped around the little scrap of golden fur trying to comfort it.
From the looks of it this kit was a newly born tom who had been abandoned by his mother. The poor thing wouldn't survive the night out here.
Quickly she devised a plan. She would wail loudly calling the attention of the others on the patrol and say she had kitted moons too early hopefully her sister, Wrencall the medicine cat, would back her up, and she would raise this kit as her son. Every kit deserves to live after all, so she wailed and wailed and did exactly what she planned.
Her sister had backed her up and now she was sitting in the nursery watching the little kit beside her friend Heronflight who she had told, along with her sister, the whole story to and was going to be his "father".
"What are you going to name him?" he asked.
"How about Risingkit?" she mewed "I have a feeling one day he'll rise and have the loyalty of the whole clan."
"Perfect," he said. "Just perfect."
(I might continue this story someday)
Reply
Hawkpelt
9/29/2014 09:30:00 pm
Suddenly the big black one pounced, and I was thrown to the ground.
Reply
Honeystar
9/30/2014 07:03:43 am
"Please don't hurt me," she whispered. "I'm harmless. My house folk left me behind."
The tabby eyed her and then asked his friends, "Do you think sh's the one in the prophecy?"
"What prophecy?"........
Reply
Brightflower
9/30/2014 08:19:11 am
"You better come with us," the tabby said. I got up and eyed them warily. "Why should I go with you?"
"Because..........
Honeystar
9/30/2014 12:51:06 pm
"....um...er...if not we'll have to kill you."
"But Finchsong the warrior code says.....," the small tortoiseshell trailed off as the tabby glared at her.
"As I was saying, please follow me."
sugarheart
9/30/2014 01:27:13 pm
Why do you want to kill me? How rude!
Hawkpelt
9/30/2014 09:05:16 pm
"Are you coming with us or not?" demanded the black tom with a hiss.
"Alright! I'll come! But you better explain as soon as we get there!"
Reply
Honeystar
10/1/2014 07:07:54 am
"Oh we will," the tabby growled, but we also want some answers."
"I'm just a house cat I don't know anything about these woods."
"We'll see about that," he muttered.
"What did you say?"
"Nothing," he growled, "And don't ask anymore questions!"
Something in his voice made me do what he said, so I said nothing more until......
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/1/2014 07:14:12 am
"Lakestar!" called the toroiseshell she-cat.
Lakestar? Finchsong? thought Alice. What strange names!
"We found a kittypet on the territory," said the tabby gruffly as a ligh grey tom padded up. "What should we do with her?"
Reply
Brightflower
10/1/2014 08:45:20 am
"Lakestar's not here right now," a cat with a golden pelt replied. "She's out hunting, but I'm sure she'll be back in a heartbeat."
"Just great!" the tortoiseshell said. "Don't move," she said to me.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/1/2014 08:55:18 am
"Not like I can," muttered Alice as she sat down to lick her paw. As she looked up, a silver-blue tabby she-cat stepped through the tunnel. She had been holding a finch, but dropped it when she saw Alice.
"What's SHE doing here?" she demanded with a snarl.
Reply
Tigerleap
10/1/2014 08:59:01 am
As the silver tabby bristled, another she-cat who looked just like her paded through the tunnel, carrying a vole.
"Calm down, Bluecloud."
Then she turned to the tabby tom. "What happened, Stripetail?"
Reply
Brightflower
10/1/2014 11:02:47 am
"We saw this kittypet wandering around. You think she could be linked to the...." Striptail was interrupted by Bluecloud.
"Don't you dare say anything! You just brought a stranger into our camp! Great StarClan, she might be part of FearClan!"
"But......"
Reply
Honeystar
10/1/2014 11:07:42 am
"Silence," a voice rang out from behind the crowd, vaguely familiar.
The crowd parted revealing a cat with a dark spotted pelt. "Welcome," the cat said. "Welcome home, oh how I've missed you and your mother Sweetkit."
"Wait, what?" several voices said in unison.
To be continued..........
Brightflower
10/1/2014 11:46:07 am
"You're tricking me. My name is Alice. What kind of name is Sweetkit anyway?"
The dark spotted cat purred with amusement. "Well, the name -kit is for kits, so we'll have to change her name."
She leaped onto a very tall trunk. "Cats, come gather to hear what I have to say. We have here our missing daughter, Alice. I call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this cat. Although she has never lived a wild cat's life, she will learn starting today. Her new name will be Sweetpaw!"
Honeystar
10/1/2014 12:42:41 pm
"This is Sweetkit?" someone asked.
"She's SweetPAW now." another replied.
"But she's dead."
"No she was presumed dead but now she is found," the dark spotted cat replied. "And she will be welcomed back, won't she Sparkfur."
"Of course Badgerstrike."
"No has explained anything to me yet," Alice or Sweetpaw who ever she was complained.
"Ok so well........"
Brightflower
10/1/2014 01:06:46 pm
(Honeystar, the dark spotted cat is Lakestar)
"You see, there are four Clans: FlameClan, NightClan, BreezeClan, and StreamClan. We're FlameClan, and we received a prophecy from StarClan." Lakestar mewed. "You were part of it."
"Me? How?" Sweetpaw asked.
"Here's how the prophecy goes......."
Reply
Honeystar
10/1/2014 01:43:15 pm
(Oh ok thought Lakestar wasn't there yet but anyways)
"A kittypet found, the lost one returned.
Believed to be dead, Brought back by the burned.
In front of their faces within their sight
But left before there was ever a fight
A darkness grows beneath the land
And the power to save them is in her hand.
You see you are a kittypet but once you were a part of this clan so you were "lost." We also thought you were dead but obviously you aren't. We are the "burned" because we are Flameclan and a few nights ago we saw you on your fence and were about to attack, but you left before we did. Bluetail was the head of the patrol if you hadn't already guessed," he said gesturing to the growling she-cat with his tail. "And apparently something horrible is going to happen and you're going to save us."
Her only response was, "...........
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/2/2014 05:43:46 am
(Oh i thought the silver tabby was Lakestar and that Lakestar was a she-cat but oh well)
"What?" cried Sweetpaw. "I don't even understand this! You can't make me stay here! And why would you think I was dead?!?!?!?!"
Reply
Brightflower
10/2/2014 08:30:34 am
"Quiet down, I'll tell you everything else in due time. But you have to be prepared," Lakestar mewed. "Oh!" she said, raising her voice. "I forgot to appoint her mentor. Sweetpaw's new mentor is Torntail"
'Torntail?' Sweetpaw thought. 'Why would a cat be named by its tail? Much less being torn?'
Torntail came to the clearing.........
Reply
Tigerleap
10/2/2014 09:52:12 am
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" cried Sweepaw. "WHAT'S WRONG WITH HIM?"
The cat that had just walked in was a dark tabby with a stub for a tail, a half-shredded ear, and a large scar across one of his eyes. The clan gasped at Sweetpaw's reaction, and the tom looked offended.
"Sweetpaw," hissed Lakepool, "You should treat your mentor with respect."
Reply
Brightflower
10/2/2014 10:36:33 am
Torntail stared at Sweetpaw. "Not so sweet, are you now?" he said.
Sweetpaw hid her embarrassment and looked at her paws. "I'm really sorry, Torntail."
"You'll be forgiven when you've learned you're place. Come with me. We're going to gather moss for the elders."
"OoooooHHH, Sweetpaw's got the moss duty!" the other apprentices mewled.
Sweetpaw followed Torntail out of the camp.
Reply
Honeystar
10/2/2014 10:57:53 am
He lead her to a clearing with mossy trees. "So you're the lost Sweetpaw."
"I guess so...."
"Well listen to me, those other apprentices and warriors are going to be giving you a hard time because of your parents."
"Who ARE my parents? I have no idea."
"Supposedly you're father is a kittypet but your mother was once a deputy of this clan. She left with you before you were even a sunrise old. But what I was saying is that you can't listen to them. Don't let them judge you by your parents. Not like they did to me."
"They teased you.....But you're soo......"
Brightflower
10/2/2014 11:09:14 am
"soooo...... torn up. What happened?"
"A few moons ago, I was involved in a border skirmish. We fought, and I happened to step into the path of a fox. Thank StarClan I survived. Now, this is how you gather moss."
A few hours later, Sweetpaw and Torntail were clutching moss and heading back to camp.
"Awww, here comes Sweetpaw from moss duty!" a white she cat apprentice taunted.
Sweetpaw ignored her and started to spread the moss around the elders den.
"What's wrong, Sweetpaw? Mouse got your tounge?" she said again.
Sweetpaw could barely contain her anger. She.....
Honeystar
10/2/2014 12:09:13 pm
She turned around paws spraying dust all over the new bedding and clawed her ear tearing the corner and spraying blood EVERYWHERE.
"Ahhhh," the cat shrieked. "Look what SOURpaw did to me!"
Torntail appeared beside Sweetpaw muttering, "I told you not to let them get to you."
Reply
Brightflower
10/2/2014 12:17:50 pm
"I'll need to remember that." Sweetpaw muttered.
"What happened?" a ginger cat with white paws came up and examined the white apprentice.
"Sweetpaw tried to kill me, Rainpetal! I'm going to bleed to death!"
"Calm down, Reedpaw. Let's come to my den and get you patched up."
Lakestar emerged from her den. "What's going on?"
Torntail spoke up. "Well....
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/3/2014 06:12:07 am
"Sweetpaw got a little carried away," said Torntail.
Lakestar bounded up. "What is wrong with you?" he hissed. "You can't just CLAW the other apprentice's ears off!"
"She was making fun of me for my mother!" spat Sweetpaw. "And I never even met her! She abandoned me in a twoleg garden!"
Reply
Tigerleap
10/3/2014 06:15:49 am
"What?" said Lakestar, utterly horrified.
"She abandoned me," said Sweetpaw more quietly.
"But why do you care?" snapped Sweetpaw. "You just forced me into your dumb clan against my will!"
"Sweetpaw," said Lakestar. "I care because..."
Reply
Hailstrike
10/3/2014 06:18:05 am
"Because I am your father." finished Lakestar.
Sweetpaw stared at him awed. That was why he was so eager to welcome her into the clan?
Reply
Honeystar
10/3/2014 02:49:42 pm
(This fanfic is sooo messed up. Her father was a kittypet. But oh well)
"Oh so now not only do I have one parent who abandoned me but two. Great," she thought, "I guess I can't be too hard on him though because he though I was dead."
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/4/2014 03:39:33 am
(yeah it's messed up but I guess when you make a fanfic with other people you get weird stuff and after all it is interesting)
Torntail stared at them. "What? Then why did you let her mother leave?"
Reply
Brightflower
10/4/2014 06:31:02 am
Lakestar stared off into Silverpelt, lost for words. Then she came back to reality and said,"Sweetpaw, we'll talk about it later," . Then he stormed back into his den.
Torntail stared at Sweetpaw. "You should get something to eat. Here," he said, walking to the freshkill pile. "Have a thrush."
Sweetpaw took a bite, savoring the tangy taste of meat. She quickly finished it off.
"Now, you must get some rest. At the next sunrise, we'll start battle training. The apprentice's den is over there," Torntail pointed his tail in that direction.
Sweetpaw went inside, where she happened to see Reedpaw.....
Reply
Hailpaw
10/4/2014 07:29:54 am
Reedpaw backed farther into the den. "Are you going to claw me again?" she wimpered.
Sweetpaw winced. "Well, you could have been nicer," she replied. "But I guess I overreacted a little bit."
"A little?" cried Reedpaw, but she was purring in amusement.
Reply
Brightflower
10/4/2014 08:08:13 am
"Maybe a lot," Sweetpaw mewed.
"Here, I made a nest for you. Rowantail told me to."
"Rowantail?"
"My mentor," Reedpaw said. "Maybe tomorrow I could introduce you to everyone in the Clan. I'm going to sleep now."
Reedpaw closed her eyes, and she was asleep in a heartbeat.
'Well, I should get some sleep as well' Sweetpaw thought as she fell asleep.
That night, she had a dream.
(Ha, that sounds like MLK's speech XD)
Reply
Tigerleap
10/4/2014 09:14:53 am
Sweetpaw opened her eyes to a shimmery forest landscape.
Looking around, she saw sparkling cats of all shapes and sizes.
A white she-cat walked up to her.
"Where am I? Murmured Sweetpaw. And who are YOU"?
Reply
Tigerleap
10/4/2014 09:15:03 am
Sweetpaw opened her eyes to a shimmery forest landscape.
Looking around, she saw sparkling cats of all shapes and sizes.
A white she-cat walked up to her.
"Where am I? Murmured Sweetpaw. And who are YOU"?
Reply
Brightflower
10/4/2014 09:35:38 am
"You are in StarClan, dear. My name is Cloudfeather, and something will happen that will affect all four Clans."
"StarClan?"
"StarClan is the place where all cats who believe go and live after they die. They become a star in Silverpelt."
"Oh. So why am I here?"
"You are going to be the hero, but you can't face these dangers by yourself. You will need cats who will help you when the time comes."
"What?"
"Remember, Sweetpaw, that things change for the better, not for the worse," Cloudfeather mewed. "It's almost sunrise. Better not keep Torntail and Reedpaw waiting."
Sweetpaw suddenly woke up to the smell of mouse. "Come on, Sweetpaw, I brought you a mouse! Wake up!"
Sweetpaw scrambled up and ate the mouse.
"Come on! Rowantail and Torntail are waiting for us!"
Sweetpaw followed Reedpaw out of the den.
Reply
Brightflower
10/7/2014 12:06:48 pm
[Cloudfeather is a shecat]
Hawkpelt
10/4/2014 12:23:23 pm
"Sweetpaw! Defend yourself! Don't let her trip you!"
Sweetpaw was with Reedpaw and a black tom named Jumppaw at battle training. She was thinking about the dream she had had the night before.
"Sweetpaw, concentrate!"
Reply
Brightflower
10/4/2014 01:08:45 pm
Sweetpaw tried to aim for Jumppaw's right shoulder, but Jumppaw sprang out of the way, causing Sweetpaw to crash to the ground. Reedpaw pounced on top of Sweetpaw.
"Let me go!" Sweetpaw grumbled.
Sweetpaw felt weight being lifted off her back. She scrambled up.
Sunclaw, Jumppaw's mentor, said,"Good work, Jumppaw. You noticed where Sweetpaw was aiming and dodged the attack."
Rowantail spoke,"Reedpaw, that was great teamwork you did there with Jumppaw."
Torntail said,"Sweetpaw, try not to look at the spot where you will attack. But good work for your first time."
"Everyone hunt before we return," Sunclaw mewed.
Sweetpaw strode into camp, proudly holding a plump sparrow. Reedpaw had two mice and Jumppaw had a thrush.
"Reedpaw, go and give one of your mice to the elders. The rest of you put your fresh kill in the freshkill pile. Then you can go eat with your friends." Rowantail said.
Reedpaw pranced to the elders den while Jumppaw and Sweetpaw grabbed something to eat. They padded to the entrance of the apprentices den.
Reply
Hailstrike
10/4/2014 09:50:27 pm
The only other apprentice, Sharppaw, bounced out of the den and settled down beside Jumppaw, who was her littermate.
Just then, a strong, lean white tom strode past to the fresh-kill pile, leaving Sweetpaw dazzled.
"Who is he?" she whispered to Reedpaw, who had by then returned and settled down with a rabbit.
Reply
Brightflower
10/5/2014 12:37:23 pm
"That's Pineclaw, one of FlameClan's most noble warrior," Reedpaw said. "He invented a new battle tactic that all the other Clans envy! The Flame Strike!"
"Maybe our mentors could teach us about it tomorrow," Sweetpaw said.
Pineclaw strode past them. "Having a good day?"
Reedpaw nearly fainted while Sweetpaw replied,"Yeah!"
Pineclaw nodded and padded towards a shady place to eat.
"Pineclaw just talked to us! Great StarClan, why would he want to talk to apprentices?" Reedpaw exclaimed.
"It's not really a big deal...." Sweetpaw started to say but was interrupted.
Reply
Honeystar
10/6/2014 07:42:58 am
"Come on you two. Are we supposed to wait ALL day for you?" Torntail growled with amusement at their startled looks, "Come on lets go."
Brightflower
10/6/2014 07:54:47 am
"What're we doing?" Sharppaw asked.
"We're going to patrol the territory, making sure none of those NightClan warriors sneak our prey our of our territory. Sharppaw and Jumppaw, you'll be gathering herbs with Rainpetal." Torntail mewed.
Brightflower
10/6/2014 12:44:46 pm
Sharpclaw sat there, staring into the dark. He was sitting vigil. For Leafstar.
Leafstar.
She'd been killed by a fox. Despite her best efforts, she'd been wounded enough to be killed. Frecklewish did her best, but in the end, it wasn't enough.
Sharpclaw sighed. He didn't feel like being leader now, but SkyClan need him. He thought about who he was going to appoint as deputy.
Maybe Cherrytail? Or Rabbitleap? There were thoughts swirling around in his head. He closed his eyes.
'StarClan, help me make the right decisions.' he thought. He looked up. Dawn was approaching, and the cats started to get ready for the day.
Sharpclaw bounded to the Skyrock. "Everyone who is old enough to catch prey, come and hear what I have to say!"
All the cats started pouring out of the den and crowded around him.
"It is time to appoint a new deputy. I say these words before StarClan and Leafstar so they may hear and approve of my choice. Cherrytail will be the new deputy of SkyClan."
"Cherrytail! Cherrytail! Cherrytail!" the whole Clan cheered.
Sharpclaw bounded over to Frecklewish. "It's time," he said.
Frecklewish nodded. "Let's go."
Sharpclaw followed Frecklewish into The Whispering Cave, where he was ready to receive his nine lives. He shuddered.
"Lie down and touch your nose to the water," Frecklewish said.
Sharpclaw did as he was told, and suddenly appeared in StarClan
"Welcome, Sharpclaw," Leafstar mewed.
"Leafstar!" Sharpclaw exclaimed.
"Are you ready to receive your nine lives?"
"Yes!"
"Alright. I give you your first life, a life of endurance. Use it to help your Clan through the tough times."
Sharpclaw felt as if he could run forever and ever......
Rainfur padded up towards Sharpclaw.
"I give you a life for courage. Use it to do whatever it takes to keep you Clanmates safe."
Sharpclaw felt as if he could take on four badgers alone and not be afraid of anything, even death.
Echosong was up next. "I give you a life of tireless energy, to be able to carry the duties of a leader."
Sparrowpelt came up."I give you a life for caring for your Clanmates, as if each were your kit."
Firestar padded towards Sharpclaw. "I give you a life of acting without fear or hesitation, to be able to know right from wrong."
Sandstorm was up next. "I give you a life for compassion, to understand what other cats need most."
Skywatcher came. "I give you a life to live by the warrior code. Let it be your guide, so you will never lose your way through your life."
Dapplekit was next.
"Dapplekit! I'm so glad to see you!"
"They said I could give you a life. So this one's for humor, to lighten everyone's spirits when everything goes wrong." She started to pad away.
"Dapplekit, don't go!"
"You're time will come when you'll be able to be with me once more. But for now, your Clan needs you,"
Lichenfur padded up. "With this life, I give you the life of having pride in this Clan. Even through hardships, we always pull through. Honor the legacy of this Clan."
Clear Sky padded up. "I don't think you know me. But I am honored to give you your last life. I am the one who founded SkyClan. With this life I give you farsightedness, to see the future of you and your Clan clearly."
Leafstar padded up. "I hail you by your new name, Sharpstar. Your old life is no more. You have now received the nine lives of a leader, and StarClan grants you the guardianship of SkyClan. Defend it well; care for the young and old; honor your ancestors and the traditions of the warrior code; live each life with pride and dignity."
Sharpstar felt so overwhelmed, so proud. He looked around. "I promise I will lead my Clan well until the end of my days."
"It's time for you to wake up. Don't worry, we'll meet again," Leafstar mewed.
Sharpstar opened his eyes to find Frecklewish standing over him. "Wow, that was amazing!"
"Remember, we aren't allowed to talk about this," Frecklewish said as he exited the cave. "But I have to admit that that was pretty awesome!"
As Sharpstar exited the cave, he heard the whole Clan cheering,"Sharpstar! Sharpstar! Sharpstar!"
Sharpstar jumped on the Skyrock. "I just want to let you know that I will live each life to the fullest and always be loyal to SkyClan!"
Cherrytail padded towards Sharpstar. "I'm so proud of you. Congratulations, Sharpstar."
Reply
Brightflower
10/7/2014 09:21:42 am
Please give me feedback!
Was this fanfic good or bad, or did anything need improving?
Thanks!
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/7/2014 07:43:15 am
On the way to the training area, the other apprentices chatted.
"So, what do you think?"
"Huh?" asked Sweetpaw, startled out of her thoughts.
"I explained the Flame Strike. What do you think of it?"
"Oh," said Sweetpaw. "It was cool."
"Just COOL? Wait, you weren't even listening!"
Reply
Brightflower
10/7/2014 08:09:13 am
"I was, just that I'm thinking about something else right now." Sweetpaw said.
"Ooohh, thinking about Pineclaw? He's way too old for you, sorry. He's even got a mate, Owlfur." Reedpaw mewed.
"No, about the prophecy. This cat called Cloudfeather came to me in a dream and said that I need help to defeat whatever I need to defeat."
"Well, if you ever need me, I'll be here."
"Thanks," Sweetpaw murmured.
Reply
Brightflower
10/7/2014 09:28:05 am
OK, I'm just gonna post the allegiances of FlameClan for future reference. Will be updated as needed.
'I remember when Cloudfeather told me I needed help from other cats. Reedpaw has been so kind to me, even if I tore her ear.' Sweetpaw thought.
"So, should I tell you about the Flame Strike?" Reedpaw said excitedly. "We could try it out with Jumppaw and Sharppaw once you know!"
"Oh, sure." Sweetpaw said, vowing to pay more attention, instead of thinking about the prophecy all the time.
"Okay. This is how it goes. The cats form a circle around the enemy, no matter how many cats there are. Anyways, all the cats pounce on the enemy at the same time. Since this is pretty powerful, we don't use it on some lowly invading badger. The fighters then pair up, and fight. The enemy is usually overwhelmed by then, but if they aren't, we back up into our original circle. Then we strike again. This goes over and over until the enemy surrenders." Reedpaw leaped up and slashed her claws through the air.
Sweetpaw nodded. "But why don't the other clans use this method?"
"Because," Reedpaw said, "They aren't as smart, and we have much stronger cats. Besides, it's called the FLAME Strike for a reason."
"It isn't because we're called Flameclan?" Sugarpaw asked.
"Oh no, it's because when we do this attack, we can be as destructive as flames, but we also look a bit like a flame, flickering back and forth."
"Oh," Sweetpaw exclaimed, "So...."
Reply
Brightflower
10/7/2014 12:08:49 pm
"So that's how it works," Sweetpaw mewed. "Are we going to learn it right now?"
"Did you not hear?" Reedpaw meowed. "We're on a border patrol, making sure those mangy NightClan warriors don't steal any of our prey. They're always doing that, and........"
Sweetpaw had stopped paying attention after "border patrol", and started to think about Cloudfeather. Who was he?
"Hey, Torntail. Do you know who Cloudfeather was?" Sweetpaw asked.
Torntail suddenly stopped, and sat down. "Cloudfeather was my mate. She was killed by a FearClan cat."
"What's FearClan?"
"How could you not know about FearClan? They......." Reedpaw started to say but was interrupted by Sweetpaw.
"Can you be quiet for at least a heartbeat? I asked Torntail, not you. Go on, Torntail."
"Well, FearClan is......"
Reply
Honeystar
10/7/2014 12:30:31 pm
...the other clan we share a border with. A border we are supposed to be patrolling," he said pointedly.
"Sorry Torntail," we mumbled.
"Sorry doesn't protect any cats."
"Look Torntail we are really sorry," Sweetpaw said, "It won't happen again."
"See that it doesn't."
"Who ate his prey today?" Reedpaw whispered to Sweetpaw.
"It's probably because I mentioned Cloudfeather," Sweetpaw sighed.
"You know I can hear you.......
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/8/2014 08:00:01 am
"Sweetpaw. And I'm sorry for snapping. But Fearclan... they aren't like Flameclan, or Rockclan, or Grassclan. Fearclan is different."
"How?" asked Sweetpaw.
"They don't follow the code like we do. They attack helpless cats... like queens expecting kits."
"Oh," Sweetpaw murmured. She understood now: Fearclan had killed Cloudfeather while she was expecting Torntail's kits.
Reply
Brightflower
10/8/2014 10:18:27 am
[Hold on a heartbeat. RockClan? GrassClan? If you scroll up, they're supposed to be NightClan, BreezeClan, and StreamClan. But I don't know which Clan name to use.]
Reply
Brightflower
10/8/2014 11:48:19 am
That's what's fun about it. :P
Deepclaw
10/8/2014 10:39:22 am
maybe this whole continue each story thing is to confusing
Reply
Brightflower
10/8/2014 10:40:25 am
When they were done patrolling the FearClan border, Sweetpaw returned to camp, where she flopped down into her nest. Heartbeats later, Reedpaw came crashing into the apprentice den.
"Sweetpaw, come outside! Lakestar's performing a warrior ceremony for Sharppaw and Jumppaw!" she exited the den before Sweetpaw could ask any questions.
Sweetpaw grumbled and crawled outside the den. The whole Clan was crowded around the great trunk.
"I, Lakestar, leader of FlameClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have trained had to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior in their turn."
"Sharppaw and Jumppaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do," Sharppaw and Jumppaw mewed solemnly.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Sharppaw, from this moment you will be known as Sharpstorm. StarClan honors your bravery and loyalty. Jumppaw, from this moment you will be known as Jumpheart. StarClan honors your cleverness and kindness. We welcome you both as full warriors of FlameClan!"
"Sharpstorm! Jumpheart! Sharpstorm! Jumpheart!' the whole Clan cheered.
Reply
Deepclaw
10/8/2014 10:41:18 am
Soooooo...
4 clans
cloudclan
treeclan
breezeclan
sunclan
just go with it. really its to confusing
Reply
Honeystar
10/8/2014 11:13:49 am
Um... Deepclaw..... The clans in the Alice/Sweetpaw fanfiction are Flameclan, Nightclan, Fearclan, and some others. And Brightflower we don't know how many actual clans there are so there could be more than four.
Anyways since everyone is contributing of course it's going to be confusing because no one has the same ideas on where the story should go.
Meow :3
Reply
Deepclaw
10/8/2014 11:28:44 am
how about like 20 clans live near eachother I think that could be okay.
this is not sarcastic
Brightflower
10/8/2014 11:50:46 am
There are 4 Clans. FlameClan, NightClan, BreezeClan, and StreamClan. [kinda like the 4 clans in the book] FearClan is sort of like BloodClan. That's my idea of the Clans.
Deepclaw... for now
10/9/2014 10:05:10 am
I know but there are so many clans we can just make seperate clan groups of four that live near eachother
deepclaw
10/8/2014 10:42:10 am
It is way easier
Reply
Deepclaw
10/8/2014 11:23:49 am
Sunclan (my new clan) needed a new madicine cat apprentice. So I decided to tell Meltstar. He called for a clan meeting. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather at the highrock for a clan meeting," he shouted. Murmurs rose fron the clan as the slowly came to the highrock. Who would I choose? Whitenose, Shredpaw, or Rosepaw? Then it hit me. I knew someone who wanted to be medicine cat. Shimmerpaw. "It has come to a time where a medicine cat apprentice," Meowed meltstar,"Who will you choose?" "Shimmerpaw," I announced. "Shimmerpaw will you accept to be medicine cat," asked Meltstar. "Of course," sqealed Shimmerpaw.
8 moons later...
The medicine cats were meeting tonight at the glowpond. I worried about something. Shimmerpaw was earning his medicine cat name.
As we walked through the bushes we started to smell the other medicine cats. We then reached the moonpool and started the meeting.When the time came I announced that he was earning his name. "Shimmerpaw you will now be known as Shimmersun," I said finally.
26 moons later
I wheezed with greencough hoping I wouldn't join starclan. Shimmersun ran in with watermint as he said,"I hope it isn't too late."
"It is," I said starting to feel faint. Shimmersuns amber eyes widened,"Noooo!" The world started to turn black. Then nothing remained.
In starclan
I opened my eyes to see two friendly faces. "Whitenose? Shredclaw?" I wasn't suprised. I was dead. Everyday I watch Shimmersun waiting for him to join me.
The end
BTW if you dont like the clan idea its okay, it was just a suggestion
Reply
Deepclaw
10/8/2014 11:25:18 am
Sorry about typos
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/9/2014 06:52:22 am
Sweetpaw cheered along for the new warriors.
"that will be you some day."
Sweetpaw turned to see a ginger tom standing beside her.
He nodded and walked away.
"Who's that?" she hissed to Reedpaw.
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 08:18:40 am
"Who's who?" Reedpaw asked.
"That ginger tom that was right next to me," Sweetpaw mewed.
"I don't recall on having ginger toms in this Clan. We do have a ginger shecat in the nursery though."
"I'm pretty sure it's a tom."
"Whatever you say."
Sweetpaw had a feeling the tom came from StarClan, but she had thought that no one would come all the way down here just to tell her that she would be a warrior someday.
"My kits!" a ginger shecat cried out. "They're gone!"
Reply
Emberkit
10/9/2014 09:07:54 am
BIG story comin' up... Just you wait.
Sample:
I opened my eyes little by little. I felt wind in my face. What? Where was I? Tons of questions flew into my head, but it was pushed back into my head as curiosity got the best of me. I opened my eyes, fully this time. I stirred awake, noticing for the first time that I was on the a log. What the heck? I looked at my hands- THEY'RE PAWS?!?!?!
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 09:32:34 am
Looking forward to THIS story! :3 meow
Reply
Deepclaw... for now
10/9/2014 10:26:38 am
I think one of you should make a story out of this prophecy
Many cats will follow light while one will be left behind. The blood and fright will end the fight. But the sky and water will run red and ground will quake and make a bend. Inside a secret you will find.
Just do whaatever you want with it
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 11:03:18 am
What do you mean "for now"?
Reply
Emberkit
10/9/2014 11:12:02 am
It means what it means...
MUA HA HA HA HA... MUA HA HA HA HA!
(You should look after your kits... they might get mischievous...)
dun dun dun...
Deepclaw
10/10/2014 10:27:33 am
It means Im changing my name (check cat chat)
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 11:02:44 am
Prologue
Fernslip walked with the other medicine cats to the Starpool. She laid down, licked the water, and closed her eyes. Once she opened them, she was in StarClan. She spotted a dark gray shecat in the distance.
"Darkburr! It's been such a long time!"
"Yes, Fernslip, it has, but I have something very important to tell you. Many cats will follow light while one will be left behind. The blood and fright will end the fight, but the sky and water will run red and ground will quake and make a bend. Inside a secret you will find."
"What does it all mean, Darkburr?"
"You will know when the time comes. It's time for you to wake up."
"Wait, wait!"
But Fernslip was awake again.
She sat up and waited for the other medicine cats to stirr. She pondered over her former mentor's words. Blood and fright? Secrets? Her first prophecy and nothing made sense.
Once the other cats were awake and ready to go, Fernslip bounded back towards the BlazeClan camp.
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 11:40:29 am
(flash forward 6 moons later)
"Come on, Thornspots! You can do this!" Fernslip mewed as Thornspots struggled.
Heartbeats later, a tiny bundle slid out. Fernslip opened it and set the tiny tom in front of Suntail. Suntail began to lick the kit's fur the wrong way.
Another kit slid out. Fernslip could tell it was a shecat as she opened the sac and licked the fur.
"I think that's it," Fernslip mewed as she licked the kit's fur. "Stormpelt, you can come in now."
A brown tom came rushing into the nursery. "Oh, Thornspots, don't you think these kits are the best ones in the Clan?"
Thornspots purred weakly as the kits started to suckle. "Why don't we name the brown tom Darkkit and the white shecat Lightkit?"
Suntail purred. "Those are beautiful names."
Fernslip froze. The prophecy. Follow Light. One left behind. Was this the beginning of the prophecy?
"I'll check on you later, Thornspots. Have fun with those kits," Fernslip mewed as she rushed out of the den towards the leader's den.
"Echostar! I need to see you now," Fernslip said as she paused at the entrance of the den.
"Come in," she said. Fernslip slid into the den.
"Echostar, I believe the prophecy will come true now! Lightkit has been born!"
"Are there any other kits?"
"Yes, one called Darkkit."
"Interesting, their names are completely opposite of each other. We'll see as time passes."
"I really hope Lightkit will save us."
Reply
Brightflower
10/9/2014 01:54:55 pm
(I forgot to mention Thornspots's mate's name. It's Brownpelt)
Chapter 1
"Hey, Lightpaw! Check out this thrush I caught!" Darkpaw exclaimed.
Lightpaw padded over toward Darkpaw. He was proudly standing next to a plump thrush. "I'm going to go give it to Birchsong, and she'll tell me a story about the four ancient Clans!" Darkpaw rushed off towards the elders den.
Lightpaw padded towards the freshkill pile. The pile was big enough to fill the whole Clan, as it was greenleaf, and the prey was running smoothly. She picked out a starling and sat by her friend, Larkpaw.
"Oh, Lightpaw, did you hear? One of Marigoldfang's kit's is going to be a medicine cat apprentice. Isn't that wonderful?"
"Yeah, it's about time Fernslip had an apprentice," Lightpaw replied.
"You know, it seems like Echostar's going to make Whitepaw and Mistpaw a warrior any time now. I heard that they did reallly good on their assesments." Larkpaw mewed.
"Larkpaw, it's time for the sunhigh patrol!" a pale ginger tom called.
"I'll be there, Archfoot! Got to go, Lightpaw," Larkpaw mewed. "Time to patrol with my mentor." Larkpaw got up and bounded towards Archfoot.
Lightpaw got up and padded over to her denmate. Darkpaw was engrossed in Birchsong's story.
"Firestar was one of the best ancient Clan leaders. He defeated many evil cats and helped keep the forest in peace. Unfortunately, he lost his last life due to wounds."
"I want to be like Firestar one day," Darkpaw mewed.
"Back in Firestar's day, was this Clan called BlazeClan?" Lightpaw asked.
"No, Lightpaw. It's old name was ThunderClan. It was such a long time ago when they changed Clan names, no one remembers why anymore." Birchsong said.
"Oh," Lightpaw said.
"Lightpaw, time for you're battle training!" a cat mewed.
Lightpaw turned around and was greeted by Patchfur, her mentor.
"Come on, we haven't got all day," he said as he headed out of the camp.
Lightpaw rushed after him and followed him to the mossy clearing.
Brightflower
10/11/2014 08:05:05 am
Lightpaw struggled to get Hawkpaw off her as he sat on her. "Get offa me!" she squeaked.
Lightpaw felt weight being lifted as Hawkpaw got up.
"Lightpaw," Patchfur mewed,"make sure you try and follow Hawkpaw's moves, so you'll be able to dodge them and hit him with a counterattack. Try again, Lightpaw."
Lightpaw focused her eyes on Hawkpaw as he leaped into the air. This time she was able to roll out of the way while raking her sheathed paws under Hawkpaw's underbelly.
"Nice job, Lightpaw!" Patchfur exclaimed. "One day she'll be one of the best warriors in the Clan!"
"Hawkpaw is older that her," Gorsepelt, Hawkpaw mentor, pointed out.
"So? If she works hard, she knows she can do it," Patchfur mewed. "Now back to camp!"
When Lightpaw and Hawkpaw arrived at the camp, everyone was looking for something, while Swiftpelt, BlazeClan's deputy, organized some kind of search patrol.
"What's going on?" Lightpaw asked.
"I don't know, let's ask Whitepaw," Hawkpaw answered.
They padded over to Whitepaw, who was searching in every crack. "What happened?" Lightpaw asked.
"Marigoldfang's kits are gone! They must have snuck out somewhere or are really good at hiding," Whitepaw mewed.
"Well, I guess we start looking," Hawkpaw said. He started to pad over to the nursery.
'With everyone checking everywhere, where am I supposed to look?' Lightpaw thought. After a while, an idea popped into her head.
"Nope. They must've been clever enough to disguise their scent. Keep looking," Patchfer mewed.
Lightpaw padded over to the dirtplace tunnel, where nobody was looking. She saw three sets of footprints heading for the exit.
"Hey, Lightpaw, found anything?" someone asked. Lightpaw spun around and slammed her forepaw on top of Larkpaw's head.
"Great StarClan, what was that for?" Larkpaw mewed.
"You scared me! I was the only one here until you snuck up on me," Lightpaw exclaimed.
"Well, sorry. Did you find anything?" Larkpaw asked.
"Yeah, look over here. There're three sets of tiny footprints. Come on, let's follow them."
Lightpaw followed the tunnel until they reached the outside of it. Although the footprints were gone, they could still smell the stench of the dirtplace. Lightpaw opened her mouth.
"They went this way," Lightpaw pointed the direction with her tail.
"Looks like they're heading for the SwiftClan border," Larkpaw mewed. That can't be good."
Lightpaw shuddered. SwiftClan (which used to be known as WindClan) was known for being tough on border crossings.
"Come on, let's go!" Lightpaw meowed as she charged in the direction. Larkpaw bounded right after her.
They ran toward the SwiftClan border, where the kits were. They were standing on the shore of the little stream that separated the border.
"Shhhh, let's see what they're up to," Lightpaw whispered.
Larkpaw nodded and hid behind a bush.
"I think we should go back now," a black tom mewed.
"Nonsense, Fuzzykit! We've made it this far without the whole Clan after us! Besides, we're practically old enough to be apprentices!" a brown tabby shecat exclaimed.
"Yeah, I know, Runningkit, but I agree with Fuzzykit. The whole Clan is looking for us, and Marigoldfang's going to be mad at us!" a pale brown tom mewed. "We should go back now."
"Fine, Brackenkit. But tomorrow at moonrise, we sneak out again!" Runningkit mewed.
"Not so fast!" Lightpaw shouted. She and Larkpaw sprang out from behind their hiding places.
"You were following us?" Fuzzykit asked, terrified.
"Yeah, and now you earn an escort back to camp!" Larkpaw mewed.
"Are we in trouble?" Brackenkit asked.
"You bet your whiskers you're going to be in trouble. Marigoldfang's worrying about you kits, and the whole Clan is searching everywhere. And you smell like dirt!" Lightpaw said.
Fuzzykit and Brackenkit bowed their heads in shame, but Runningkit didn't look ashamed.
"Come on, let's get back to camp," Larkpaw said.
Finchwing
10/10/2014 12:00:13 pm
WARRIORS fan fiction special edition
Finchwing's Calling
Prolougue
An old grey cat stood at the foot of a tree. It watched a cat in the mist. The other cat was white with gray stripes and had blue eyes.
Then it vanished and mist consumed it.
The old cat mumbled slowly,"birds wings will guide the clans out of darkness and fear."
The world started to shake and the world went black. Grayfang woke up. "THE PROPHECY HAS SPOKEN," he sscreamed.
Chapter 1
Finchkit rolled around in the nest. he heard talking outside the nursery.
"Do you think the prophecy ment him," said one cat. "We'll see soon enough Sleeteye," the other one said.
Finchkit didn't get it. He was the only tom in the nursery and he wasn't special. Was he?
Then he realized that he started to open his eyes. Already? Maybe he was special. But then he realized his sisters Softkit and Shadekit
had already opened their eyes and were playing.
He started to wail and his mother Coldwhisker rushed in. Her blue eyes widened and she said sounding relieved,"Finally he's opened his eyes." Then a Gray cat like Shadekit came in,"really my son will live?" They thought he was going to die?.
Finchkit looked around him. He felt so excited. He stood up and walked over to his sisters,"Want to go see around the camp," he sqeaked sounding eager. "When you're older Finchkit," his dad Weatheredstone interrupted. "But--" "No buts," his father interrupted.
Chapter 2
It had been three moons since Finchkit opened his eyes and he never saw camp because he got into trouble. "Please can I go out now," he groaned. But no one was in the nursery. He sighed heavily.
Then Shadekit walked in. "Mom said you can see the camp now," she said exitedly. Finchkit nearly bounced outside to see the camp.
He gasped when he saw it.
Shadekit pointed to a small cave in the corner of camp,"That's the medicine cat den and next to it is the warriors den," she explained as she pointed to a hollow bush. Then she pointed towards an old looking tree stump sheltered by a tree,"that's the elders den."
A gray cat stood outside of it looking frightened of him.
"What's his problem," asked Finchkit. "Oh, he just," Shadekit paused,"never mind." "Oh but you see that tall rock it's the highrock Deepstar's ; ) den is at the top of it," Shadekit continued. But Finchkit wasn't listening. He was thinking. Something wasn't right in his clan...
TO BE CONTINUED...
:3 MEOW!
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/10/2014 10:12:32 pm
"Can't catch me, Sunpaw!"
The two apprentices ran through the training cave, leaping and batting at each other with sheathed claws.
"Oh, yeah?!" replied the white-and-brown she-cat, chasing her sister until her tail was in reach.
"Gotcha!" she cried, pouncing on it.
"Hey!"
"Calm down, both of you!" grumbled Hawkpaw's mentor, a black tom with white stripes.
"Go easy on them, Spiderweb," purred a ginger queen.
"Sorry, Sweetnose, we were just messing around," said Sunpaw guiltily.
A yowl sounded from the entrance of the cave. "Is anybody in there?"
"Just us, Whitefoot," called Sweetnose.
A black tom with white paws emerged, a smaller ginger cat trailing behind him.
"Hello, Flamepaw," purred Hawkpaw. Sunpaw swore she could see a glimmer of affection in her sister's eyes. She blinked, and the glint disappeared. I must have imagined it, she thought. Theyr'e just friends. "Right?" she thought out loud.
"What are you talking about?" Her sister looked puzzled.
"Oh, nothing," replied Sunpaw. "C'mon, let's practice hunting."
~::~
"Look at this!" announced Sunpaw proudly as she dropped a fat rabbit at her paws.
"Well, it's pretty good, I guess," said Hawkpaw, but she sounded bored.
"Well, you could atleast show a little respect," replied Sunpaw. "It was hard to catch it, and- whoa, where did that come from?" Her sister had just dragged a full-grown hawk from behind a bush.
"I caught it, you mousebrain," said Hawkpaw. "It swooped down to catch the mouse I was stalking, so-" Hawkpaw paused. "Do you smell that?"
Her mentor sniffed the air, then hissed. "Meadowclan!" he snarled. "They've been stealing our prey for some time now. We have to warn the camp!"
"But I doubt they'll be able to get there," sniffed Sunpaw.
"Yeah, they couldn't swim their way through a puddle!" scoffed Hawkpaw.
"Shut up, you two, and come on," growled Spiderweb. "Before they get here."
The apprentices fell silent as they followed the black tom through the undergrowth. As they got closer to Sky Lake, Sunpaw picked up snarls and yowls of cats coming from the nearby islands.
"I think they beat us here!" she cried, hurtling through bushes and ferns until she emerged into a clearing- full of fighting cats.
"Protect the camp!" yowled Spiderweb as he hurled himself into the water. Hawkpaw and Sunpaw followed. When they emerged into the camp, there were already some Meadowclan warriors there. Pulling Hawkpaw out of the water, she spotted a brown tabby run past them- and into the nursery.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/10/2014 10:19:27 pm
Hawkpaw hurtled into the nursery after the brown tom. Through the dim light she could see him hissing at Ivygrass and her kit, Pinekit- Hawkpaw's mother and sister.
Screeching with fury, she threw herself at him, claws unsheathed. He yowled in suprise as they tumbled to the ground, but easily overpowered her with his size. Remembering her training, Hawkpaw let herself go limp. This fooled the tom into thinking he had beaten her. As he relaxed, Hawkpaw flung him forward and lept to her paws. She then raked her hind claws across his stomach until he yowled in pain. Pulling back, she watched him run out of the nursery.
Another cat, a small black tom, ran in, snarling.
"Nightpaw!" cried Hawkpaw.
The apprentice froze. "Hawkpaw? Is that you?"
"Yes, it's me," said the she-cat. She felt embarrassed for stopping to recognize him.
"Ummm....." Nightpaw looked nervous, too. "I-"
Suddenly a yowl split the air outside. "I have to go help," he said quickly before turning to run.
Hawkpaw was glad he left. She had seen him at gatherings- they were friends. She didn't want to hurt him.
Emerging into the sun, she found some of the Meadowclan warriors were retreating, leaping into the entrance pool and diving to leave the camp. Looking around for someone to help, she spotted Elmwood, a brown tom, near the Cloud Rock. She was about to run over when she noticed he wasn't fighting the golden she-cat in front of him. What is he doing? she wondered. He licked the cat's ear before looking around to see who was watching. Then he stepped back, and the she-cat leaped up onto Cloud Rock and over onto something on the other side.
Hawkpaw decided to check it out, but she didn't have time to even move a pawstep before she heard Whitefoot yowl.
"Sweetnose is dead!"
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/10/2014 10:20:29 pm
Sunpaw was chasing off a brown tabby tom that had just run from the nursery when she heard Whitefoot's yowl.
The apprentice froze. Sweetnose was her mentor, but she had been in the nursery after her kitting just a few days before.
This can't be happening, she thought. Sweetnose can't be dead.
She ran to the nursery. "Where is Oddkit?" she asked.
"Right here," Ivygrass called from the shadows. "But I didn't realize Sweetnose had even left the nursery."
"Neither did I," replied Hawkpaw from the entrance.
"Why did she leave the nursery?" wailed Whitefoot. "Why did she have to die?"
"Well, I doubt Whitefoot would lie about something like that," said Ivygrass. "I'm sure he'll be sitting vigil tonight."
Sunpaw ran back into the sunlight, wondering who had killed Sweetnose.
"I'll tear their throat out," growled Whitefoot. "I'll get them!"
"Whitefoot, calm down!" Highstar had walked up behind him. "We will all grieve for Sweetnose, but violence is not the answer!"
Whitefoot whirled around o face his leader. Hawkpaw was horrified to see the rage in his eyes.
"You don't know how it feels," he hissed. "You didn't just lose your mate!"
"But I lost one of my finest warriors," replied Highstar evenly. "Whitefoot, don't lose your head. I know youv'e already lost your heart."
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/10/2014 10:48:08 pm
Hahaha SPOILERS FOR MY FANFIC DONT READ IF YOU DONT WANT TO HEAR THE SPOILERS!!!
Whitefoot becomes Lostheart
Hawkpaw and Bravepaw become mates (duh)
Nightpaw goes crazy because he likes Hawkpaw but can't be her mate and corrupts Meadowclan (even more)
Oddkit becomes Hawkpelt's apprentice
Elmwood and the gold she-cat, Burningsun, become mates, Burningsun joins Cloudclan because Meadowclan kills two of their kits
HAHAHA that's all.
Reply
Finchwing
10/11/2014 12:13:03 am
Warriors special edition
Finchwings calling
chapter 3
Shadekit and Softkit were playing while Finchkit played with Lilyfur's kits Longkit and Wetkit.
Finchkit chased Wetkit around while Longkit tried to trap Wetkit in between.
"LET ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER BENETH THE HIGHROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING,"yelled a voice from outside. Finchkit crept out to sit with his mother.
All of Breezeclan (Happy Brightflower) started to get ready for what the leader was saying.
"The apprentices den is empty and Breezeclan is weaker than the other clans, Coldwhiskers kits are 5 and a half moons old, so I would like to make them apprentices," Deepstar announced,"will the kits join me under the highrock?"
Finchkit afraid as he was stepped over to the highrock. "BLAH BLAH BLAH," (I don't remember the ceremony) BLAH BLAH BLAH.
"Then from now on you shall be known as Finchpaw and your mentor will be--""He can be my apprentice," shouted the medicine cat Searblaze. "Ummm okay," said Finchpaw who was very puzzled. "Fine," agreed Deepstar.
Finchpaw saw Shadepaw and Softpaw walk away with their mentors
Sleeteye and Droprain. He sighed. What did he just do.
"Wait," shouted Deepstar you can't be his mentor. "WHAT," shouted Searblaze. "Finchpaw your mentor will be ummm Coalheart," he said. Finchpaw felt sooo relieved. But Searblaze looked at him coldly.
Chapter 4
Finchpaw strolled along the path while Coalheart explained the 4 different clans Flameclan, Nightclan, Streamclan, and Breezeclan.
They walked along the border and reached the stream. "This stream is full of fish and runs from Breezeclan to Streamclan," explained Coalheart.
"What are fish," Finchpaw asked. "They're prey that lives in water, they have scales and big eyes and they're personally my favorite," explained Coalheart.
"Umm I have a question," said Finchkit,"why is it like the clan is keeping secrets from me. I never got into trouble that bad so it was like Coldwhisker was afraid of something and one of the elders keeps looking at me like I'm a badger."
"Oh so you should know then... the clan believes you are part of a prophecy. Grayfang had a dream where there was a cat that looked like you and we decided to let you be until the time came which is now," Coalheart said sounding dissapointed.
"What, no way I can't," shouted Finchpaw,"I'm just an apprentice this is not a good time to tell me I'm different!"
"Your not but you will save the clans,"whispered Coalheart.
Chapter 5
"Now pounce," shouted Coalheart. Finchpaw leaped onto a squirrel killing it in one blow. "Wow," said Finchpaw proudly,"I never knew hunting was so easy." "Yes but its learning how to fight thats the hardest," said Coalheart as he was laughing.
"Oh that reminds me we need to start battle training,"said Coalheart still trying not to laugh. So Finchkit and Coalheart padded out to the training hollow.
Coalheart spinned launching at Sleeteye. "This is a move I call spin and slash," he shouted. "Slash," asked Shadepaw,"but it sounds so battle hungry?" "Yeah," said Finchpaw sounding confused.
Then shouting came from the camp,"HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLP," it was Coldwhisker
Reply
Finchwing
10/11/2014 12:30:03 am
SPOILERS
Searblaze wounds Coldwhisker and kills Weatheredstone
Searblaze is killed by Finchpaw
Finchpaw takes over as a medicine cat (Finchwing)
Deepstar says Finchwing can have a mate because he wasn't a medicine cat in the first place.
ENJOY
Reply
Finchwing
10/11/2014 03:02:36 am
More of the super edition
Finchwing's calling
chapter 5 cont.
Finchpaw froze. "What was that,"he asked. "It doesn't matter but we need to get back to camp, now," Coalheart said sounding worried. Finchpaw didn't need to be told twice. He ran as fast as he could.
When Finchpaw reached camp he stopped. In front of the tunnel a cat was lying on the ground. It was Weatheredstone. He was dead. "NOOOOOOOOO,"Finchpaw screamed.
Once again screams split the air. But Finchpaw was too scared. What was in the camp that could have killed one of the best warriors in Breezeclan?
But what if someone else was killed? So he decided he had to see. He stalked into camp and saw a horror. It was Searblaze! He stood aiming a blow at Coldwhisker. Coldwhisker had blood dripping from her shoulders and legs. "Mom," Finchpaw shouted.
"It's too late," Searblaze laughed,"and like an apprentice will kill me!"
Then Finchpaw realized he knew one move. He leaped up and slashed Searblaze down. He shreiked loud enough for starclan to hear.
"Since there's no medicine cat you won't be able to get herbs for yourself," explained Finchpaw.
That night Searblaze bled to death and was sent to the dark forest...
WHO WILL BE MEDICINE CAT?
WILL COLDWHISKER DIE?
WHY AM I ASKING SO MANY QUESTIONS?
I DON"T KNOW!
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Finchwing
10/11/2014 08:00:20 am
\/\/@RRI0R5 5UPER EDITI0N
FINCHWING'S CALLING
chapter 6
"May starclan light your path,"mumbled Finchpaw as he looked at where his clanmates buried Weatheredstone. Shadepaw and Softpaw stood next to him.
Last night Deepstar hoped to have a dream about the new medicine cat. Who would it be? He did not, but if starclan said he had to be he would.
The sun started to rise over the moor when Deepstar called for a clan meeting,"let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneeth the highrock for a clan meeting!"
Sleeteye and Marshfur sat next to Finchpaw whispering who they thought would be medicine cat. He heard each cat say he would be it, but he ignored them.
"As we know Searblaze our old medicine cat was a traitor and thanks to Finchpaw we were able to stop him from killing a cat. So we need a new medicine cat. Overnight I had a dream. I was in camp and a finch flew into my den. This could not mean anything but that Finchpaw will be medicine cat. Hopefully he agrees," announced Deepstar. "I will be medicine cat," agreed Finchpaw.
"You will learn from starclan," said the deputy Tanglenose.
When the clan meeting was over Finchpaw walked over to his new den to see what it looked like. It was... interesting. Inside there was five nests. One was for him. A hole in the cave was filled with plants and pouches of leaves full of other things. It smelled terrible! Would he really have to live like this?
chapter 7
Finchpaw was in a misty forest. It obviuosly wasn't in Breezeclan territory. Then a cat appeared in the mist. "Weatheredstone,"said Finchpaw. "Yes son it is me,"Weatheredstone said,"I hear you need help on how to be a medicine cat." "Yes,"answered Finchpaw. "Well starclan cats know lots of things," said Weatheredstone,"I was chosen to give you knowledge."
Then a wave of light sorrounded Finchpaw and a stream of colors waved into his head. "And remember," Weatheredstone paused,"birds wings will guide the clans out of darkness and fear."
Finchpaw felt overwhelmed. The world started to go black and then it was all gone...
chapter 8
Finchpaw woke up looking like a hedgehog. Coldwhisker laid in a nest snoring. Then Finchpaw realized he knew everything about herbs. What had happened?
He felt sick. Then he realized it was because the knowledge was overwhelming.
When he walked outside to see the sun he saw the morning patrol was returning to camp. Marshfur was leading the patrol followed by Droprain, Softpaw, and Thundercloud.
Then he noticed he would have to go to the (ummm?) Starpuddle
(still?) to meet with the other medicine cats. He looked down. It must have rained because there was a puddle.
In it he saw his blue eyes and white pelt with grey stripes. Then the water turned red and the cat in the puddle turned into Searblaze and then into nothing. He shuddered. Was that a sign from starclan?
Was he really special?
"Hey Finchpaw want a mouse,"asked Softpaw. "Sure,"answered Finchpaw cheerfully. As he ate he noticed Softpaw was Quieter than usual.
"Is something wrong,"he asked. "No, just that I have feelings for Longpaw," she answered. Finchpaw forgot that Longpaw and Wetpaw were apprentices. Soon Snowkit and Fallenkit would be apprentices.
But... wait WHAT! "What,"blurted Finchpaw,"you're just an apprentice!" "Well you're a medicine cat, you can't have a mate so it's none of your buisness,"shouted Softpaw angrily.
But Softpaw was right. It was none of his buisness to keep his sister safe from trouble...
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Brightflower
10/12/2014 10:48:41 am
Is no one going to continue the Sweetpaw story?
I might as well continue it then........
"Are you sure they're gone, Bouncefur? They might be hiding somewhere," Lakestar mewed.
"Yes! One heartbeat they're next to me, the next they're gone!" Bouncefur shrieked.
"All right, Bouncefur. Bluecloud, organize the search patrols."
All the cats started to crowd around Bluecloud.
"I want Stripetail, Badgerstrike, Pineclaw, Rowantail, and Reedpaw to search the area near the FearClan border. Torntail, Sweetpaw, Finchsong, Sparkfur, and I will search the NightClan border. Lakestar, Sharpstorm, Jumpheart, and Duskwing should search the interior of the territory. Mousepelt, Patchheart, Foxblaze, and Liontail stay behind in case anyone comes. All right, start searching!"
When Lightpaw and Larkpaw came back to camp with Brackenkit, Fuzzykit, and Runningkit, Marigoldfang rushed over to them.
"Thank StarClan you found them!" Marigoldfang exclaimed.
"They snuck out from the dirtplace tunnel. We found them near the SwiftClan border," Lightpaw mewed.
Marigoldfang gasped. "SwiftClan border?"
"Yeah, and they were making plans about sneaking out tomorrow at moonrise," Larkpaw said.
"Oh, you three kits are going to be in BIG trouble now! No leaving the nursery for a quarter moon!" Marigoldfang scolded.
"Great job for finding them!" a cat exclaimed. Lightpaw turned around to find Patchfur.
"Oh, thanks," Lightpaw mewed.
"Well, it's almost time for the Gathering at the island. Echostar said you both can come," Patchfur mewed.
"Okay, thanks for telling us," Larkpaw said.
"Go and get some freshkill. You'll need it," Patchfur mewed as he padded away.
Chapter 2
"We have two new kits born by Pinefeather. Firekit and Mintkit!" Ryestar of SwiftClan announced.
Sweetpaw listened as the leaders announced their good tidings.
"I am sorry to announce that Acornstalk will be retiring from his deputy position. Smokytail will take her place," Hollystar of DarkClan announced.
"Smokytail! Smokytail!" the four Clans cheered.
"Also," Beavertail, DarkClan's medicine cat said,"Cherrypaw has agreed to become my apprentice."
"Cherrypaw! Cherrypaw!"
"RushClan has four apprentices: Meadowpaw, Slippaw, Amberpaw, and Whiskerpaw!" Snailstar of RushClan mewed.
"Meadowpaw! Slippaw! Amberpaw! Whiskerpaw!"
"BlazeClan's prey is plentiful, its border's strong. We've recently had a fox inside our territory, but it ran over the DarkClan border," Echostar mewed.
"Great, we love foxes in our territory," Hollystar mewed.
"Now, this Gathering is concluded," Ryestar said as she bounded off the Great Tree.
Sweetpaw got up and started to cross the trunk. The RushClan apprentice in front of her almost tripped, but a warrior caught her just in time and hauled her back up.
Sweetpaw jumped off the trunk, and started to follow Echostar back to BlazeClan.
When Sweetpaw entered camp, she padded over to her nest in the apprentices den, curled up, and closed her eyes.
(OK, I just realized I put Sweetpaw instead of Lightpaw for the last few sentences! My bad)
Lightpaw woke in a starry field with green, lush grass and flowers. She opened her mouth. Prey! She immediately dropped into a hunting crouch.
"Lightpaw," a cat mewed.
Lightpaw whirled around, catching the dark gray shecat by surprise. "Who are you?" Lightpaw asked.
"I'm Lilyfoot (name changed from prologue to prevent confusion), and I'm here to tell you something I told Fernslip moons ago, before you were born."
"Aren't you Fernslip's mentor?" Lightpaw asked.
"Yes."
"Oh, okay. Tell me whatever you wanted to tell me."
"Many cats will follow light while one will be left behind. The blood and fright will end the fight, but the sky and water will run red and ground will quake and make a bend. Inside a secret you will find."
"Is this a prophecy?"
"Yes."
"So I'm light?"
"I don't know, but you might be. That's all I know."
"Well, that was just plain useful. How am I supposed to know what to do?"
"You will find out along the way. StarClan will be there to guide you."
Lightpaw opened her eyes. Daylight was streaming through the opening of the den. Lightpaw crawled out of the den.
"Hey, Lightpaw! We're going to do the dawn patrol with Gorsepelt, Archfoot, and Larkpaw. Eat up; we'll be going soon!" Patchfur mewed.
Lightpaw padded over to the freshkill pile and picked a thrush. She spotted Larkpaw near the apprentices den and sat next to her.
"Hey, Lightpaw! I heard that Whitepaw and Mistpaw's warrior ceremony will be at sundown today. Vinesplash [mom] and Whitefall [dad] are looking proud!"
True to her word, Vinesplash and Whitefall had a happy look in their eyes and were boasting about their kits.
When they both finished their prey, Larkpaw and Lightpaw padded over to the entrance of the den, where they met Patchfur, Gorsepelt, and Archfoot.
"Let's go," Gorsepelt mewed
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/15/2014 05:48:38 am
Sweetpaw followed her patrol through the territory. With no luck, they headed back to camp. As they approached the thorn barrier, they heard a horrible wail.
"Hailkit!"
"Calm down, Bouncefur. I think I can save him."
"Mama, is Hailkit okay?" whimpered Hailkit's sister, Shellkit.
Sweetpaw raced through the barrier after Torntail and heard him ask,
"What in Starclan happened?"
Reply
Brightflower
10/15/2014 07:29:01 am
[Ha, Hailstar and Shellheart. I see :3]
"I found my kits!" Bouncefur exclaimed. "They somehow snuck behind the thorn barrier. Shellkit managed to slip out, but Hailkit's still in there, and he sprained his paw!"
"It's okay, Bouncefur, we're all here to help," Bluecloud mewed.
"Maybe Shellkit can show us where he crawled in. Then, we dig a hole big enough to fit somecat under it, and get Hailkit out!" Sweetpaw exclaimed.
"That's a great idea, Sweetpaw!" Finchsong mewed. "Okay, Shellkit, show us the entrance."
Shellkit padded over to a tiny hole only big enough for a 2 month old kit. The cats started to dig.
What seemed like moons later, Sweetpaw and the others finally managed to make the hole. "So, who's going in?" Sparkfur asked.
"I think Sweetpaw can do it," Torntail mewed.
"Ummm...."
Reply
Finchwing
10/16/2014 09:21:27 am
Warriors super edition
FINCHWING'S CALLING
chapter 9
Finchpaw walked through the ferns as he headed to the (come on what is it in the Sweetpaw story?). What would the other medicine cats think?
Starclan already approved but he had never seen any other medicine cats before. When he reached the _______ he saw the other cats.
"Stay back,"one shouted,"you're not Searblaze!" "Stop Tearface,"another said calmly,"he must have a way to explain whats happening."
"Searblaze is dead and I was chosen to be the new medicine cat," Finchpaw explained,"I'm Finchpaw and also I killed Searblaze because he betrayed Breezeclan." The other cats looked at him in shock.
"He wouldn't," the third paused,"you're lying!" "Ugh, well this is Knotfur and I'm Lilysong," the nice one announnced. "Maybe we should trust him," Tearface said uneasily. All three cats agreed.
When Finchpaw licked at the cold water his muscles tensed. He opened his eyes to see a black tom and a creamy colored tom. "Who are you," Finchpaw asked. "I'm Fleetpelt and this is Darkwing we will be born as kits in Breezeclan soon,"then the two cats melted into water.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH," Finchpaw woke up screaming. The other medicine cats were staring at him.
"I'm not crazy," he shouted then stomped back to camp. When he reached it a cat jumped at him. "Harmonyfang's having her kits," it was Goldenclaw.
Finchpaw rushed in to see cats stirring in camp. At midnight? He walked into the medicine cat den. He grabbed cobweb and stood over the nest with Harmonyfang laid in.
Her mate Rimflow had already done most of the preperation. "Push," he hissed,"do it!"
chapter 10
The kits were born. Finchpaw sighed in relief. Then he realized the two kits were a black tom and a creamy colored tom. "I think they should be Fleetkit and Darkkit. "WHAT,"Finchpaw shouted...
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Braveflame
10/17/2014 11:11:48 am
"Hedgepaw, stop!"
"What is it now?" grumbled the silver apprentice as the mouse she was stalking scurried away.
"Your stance was all wrong," replied her white mentor.
"Come on, Cloudpelt," she said. "I still would have caught the mouse!"
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Finchwing
10/18/2014 02:02:23 am
Dun Dun Dun... More warriors super edition
Finchwing's calling
chapter 10 cont.
"What do you mean what,"Rimflow challenged. Finchpaw stared at the kits. What just happened? Had he just insulted two kits that he just met?
"Mouse-brain,"hissed Rimflow. "I just--" "No," interrupted Rimfolow, "It would be better with Searblaze!" Finchpaw bristled,"you have to listen!" "Never,"shouted Rimflow before stomping back to the warriors den.
Finchpaw helped Harmonyfang and the kits to the nursery before heading to sleep. But when he opened his eyes he wasn't in his den.
He was in a hollow. What? "Finchpaw I need to tell you something,"
a voice shouted,"it's not your fault about the kits. Rimflow is in danger of something evil you will have to figure it out to save him."
"Why,"asked Finchpaw. "Exactly,"the voice boomed. Finchpaw thought he remembered something like that in a dream. What was it?
Then, he remembered it. It was in swamp and there was... a monster but not ones like on the thunderpaths. But it was big and it... talked. It said it was... he couldn't remember.
The world started to turn black and then nothing was there...
CAN FINCHPAW GO ON AS MEDICINE CAT?
WHAT IS THE DANGER?
DIDN'T I DO THIS BEFORE?
I CAN'T REMEMBER!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Reply
Brightflower
10/19/2014 05:54:32 am
[Author's Note]
My fanfic's so messed up.....
I have decided to change DarkClan to NightClan because of Lightpaw's brother Darkpaw's name (which will have an impact in the story. I think. I don't know!)
The story will be called Lightstar's Path.
Please leave a comment for any suggestions to the story.
Thanks! :3
Reply
Brightflower
10/19/2014 07:02:32 am
Also, Thornspots' mate is Stormpelt, and the other queen is Suntail, not Sorrelwhisker.
Reply
Brightflower
10/19/2014 07:21:28 am
Chapter 3
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey come gather beneath the Highledge to hear what I have to say." Echostar announced.
All the cats began to crowd around the Highledge. Lightpaw noticed Vinesplash and Crowpelt (name changed to prevent confusion) frantically licking their kits' fur.
"Right now is the time that we need new warriors. Whitepaw and Mistpaw, come forward." Echostar mewed.
Whitepaw and Mistpaw padded forward, their whiskers quivering with anticipation.
"I, Echostar, leader of BlazeClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior in their turn. Whitepaw and Mistpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do," Whitepaw and Mistpaw mewed solemnly.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Whitepaw, from this moment you will be known as Whitenose. StarClan honors your warmth and honesty, and we welcome you as a full warrior of BlazeClan. Mistpaw, from this moment you will be known as Mistpelt. StarClan honors your modesty and initiative, and we welcome you as a full warrior of BlazeClan."
"Whitenose! Mistpelt! Whitenose! Mistpelt!"
"Remember, you two warriors have your vigil tonight," Echostar mewed as she padded back into her den.
Lightpaw woke up to the sound of snoring. She looked at the sky. It was still dark outside, but the tip of the sun poked out of the horizon. Lightpaw got up and looked around the den. Whitepaw and Mistpaw were nowhere to be found.
Then she remembered. Whitepaw and Mistpaw were Whitenose and Mistpelt now. They were holding their vigil at the entrance of the den. Lightpaw tried to sleep again, but couldn’t.
When the sun finally poked up out of the horizon, Lightpaw stepped out of the den. Vinesplash and Crowpelt were talking to each other in hushed tones. Mothpelt was assigning the dawn patrol. Patchfur was telling the new warriors to get some sleep. Fernslip poked her head out of her den. Lightpaw heard Runningkit’s complaints about not leaving the nursery. It was just a regular, normal day in BlazeClan.
Patchfur padded towards Lightpaw. “Hey, we’re going to be on a hunting patrol with Thrushcloud, Dewclaw, and Sedgefall. Oh, and also, your assessment is in a few days.”
‘I hope it’s a warrior assessment, not a ‘let’s see where you are assessment’.’ Lightpaw thought.
When Thrushcloud, Dewclaw, and Sedgefall were ready, they set out to find prey. Patchfur was the first to find prey, and he caught a sparrow. After that, Thrushcloud, Dewclaw, Sedgefall, and Lightpaw all found enough prey for the morning.
On their way back to camp, Larkpaw ran into their way, almost crashing into Lightpaw.
“Are you all right, Larkpaw?” Patchfur asked.
“I’m all right, but the dawn patrol isn’t,” Larkpaw replied. “The fox that went into the NightClan border is back, and it attacked the dawn patrol! I’m here to get help.”
“All right,” Patchfur mewed. “You all take this prey back to camp, I’ll see if I ca help with that fox. And send reinforcements!”
When the patrol arrived at camp, Larkpaw yelled,” The dawn patrol’s been ambushed by that fox we drove out a moon earlier!”
Echostar rushed out of her den. “Thanks for the announcement, Larkpaw. All right, I want Molepelt, Stormpelt, Sedgefall, Petalsplash, and Vinesplash to come with me. Mothpelt, you’re in charge until I come back. The rest of you, stay alert. Let’s go!”
Lightpaw put her prey in the freshkill pile, and then took a mole to Birchsong. “Do you think they’ll be all right?” she asked.
“I’m pretty sure they’ll be fine. Patchfur and the others have battled foxes before,” Birchsong replied.
“I hope so.”
Reply
Braveflame
10/20/2014 06:02:02 am
"Hedgepaw..."
"Fine," she snapped. "I'm sorry."
"Sorry catches no prey."
"A lot like you..." Hedgepaw muttered under her breath. Ever since she had learned to hunt, Cloudpelt spent all his time criticizing her instead of helping.
Reply
Finchwing
10/20/2014 10:22:30 am
you get the idea
Finchwings calling
chapter 11
Finchpaw padded in the medicine cats den. He was worried about the danger, Rimflow, and Coldwhiskers wound. What if Searblazes intentions were made by something that would make Rimflows intentions really bad? The whole clan could be in danger.
He would have to tell Deepstar. But what if the leader thought the two topics were completely unrelated? He would be embarrassed in front of his clan leader. But something had to be done.
He stepped outside of his den when in the nursery a cat started to scream. Finchpaw rushed in to see Rimflow stood over Harmonyfang. "I just said I could leave the nursery every once and a while,"she squealed. Finchpaw also saw that Fleetkit was wounded in his legs.
The kit wriggled in fear. But he hadn't even opened his eyes yet. How did he Know what was happening? But that wasn't important.
Finchpaw aimed a blow at Rimflow. He knocked him down. "You," he shouted,"Fear will consume the clans!" Rimflow fell to the ground. Dead.
But what Fear? Then memories flooded over Finchpaw. The thing in the swamp was named Fear. It was real! Maybe it was making the cats do something or maybe it was more powerful than starclan and could control cats.
So many ideas. But which one was real? This could lead him to an answer. Starclan probably would give him more clues because he found out what the danger was! This was impressive...
WHAT WILL HAPPEN?
WHO WILL BE NEXT TO BETRAY?
WHY DO I KEEP DOING THIS?
I DON"T KNOW!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Reply
Finchwing
10/20/2014 10:57:42 am
Just because I want to
Finchwings calling
Chapter 12
"We must be keeping precautions,"Deepstar announced,"our trusted medicine cat once again defeated whatever this Fear is doing." The cats looked nervous. But what did they have to hide? "We will punish cats who aren't acting like a warrior should," he continued.
"Also there is something I need to do,"Deepstar said,"Finchpaw has protected many cats now and I know it would be his mentors job but since he shouldn't have been medicine cat I will give him his full medicine cat name." "What," said Softpaw sounding puzzled. Protests wrose from the crowd. "He doesn't deserve special treatment!" "He's too young!" "He won't help us!"
But Deepstar just kept on talking. "Will you accept," he asked. "No," said Finchpaw,"They're right I can't help as a medicine cat I'm to young and I'll just put us in more danger." Then a silver warrior appeared. It was Weatheredstone. "Deepstar he will earn his name from starclan," he said,"right now."
"WHAT,"Finchpaw said,"No I can't this is too much. I'm in a stupid prophecy, I'm not old enough to be a full medicine cat, and I just feel like I'm different and like I'm stronger than Starclan. I just can't. I'm too afraid!"
"But you need to--" "NO I can't. How do you even know if Starclan is just driving me crazy because I'm the danger. I killed two cats," Finchpaw interrupted. "Yes you can," murmured Weatheredstone.
"I refuse," Finchpaw said. Deepstar and the rest of the clan looked at him hatefully. "Then you are useless to keep," growled Deepstar,"You are banished!"
"Fine," said Finchpaw,"see what the prophecy will do without me!"
"GO NOW,"yelled Deepstar. Finchpaw started to cry before he leaped away. He ran until he reached twolegplace. His new home.
"I can live as a kittypet," he yelped before dissapearing into the forest of houses.
WHY DO I JUST DO THIS ANYWAY?
WHAT WILL FINCHPAW DO?
WILL STARCLAN STOP HIS BAD CHOICES?
I DON"T KNOW!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Reply
Brightflower
10/20/2014 11:13:41 am
Well, that story escalated pretty quickly........
Reply
Brightflower
10/20/2014 12:41:54 pm
Since I'm bored.........
SPOILERS!!!
Hawkpaw becomes Hawkstorm
Larkpaw becomes Larksong
Brackenkit's becomes a medicine cat apprentice
Suntail has two kits after Runningkit, Fuzzykit, and Brackenkit move out of the nursery. Names: Waterkit and Duckkit
Suntail's mate is actually from RushClan (Tallspots), but Thrushcloud pretends to be her mate
Echostar has six lives since Whitenose and Mistpelt's warrior ceremony.
Also, I need warrior names for Lightpaw and Darkpaw! I'll pick the best name to use in my story.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/21/2014 06:24:25 am
OOH! OOH! PICK ME! PICK ME!
How about...
Lightsong or
Lightspring or
Lightsun
and
Darknight or
Darkshade or
Darkwing
Reply
Brightflower
10/21/2014 08:53:12 am
I'll think about them............
And I thought no one read my story.
Reply
Finchwing
10/21/2014 10:35:01 am
one Darkwing is one of my charachters and two I really like your story!
Brightflower
10/21/2014 09:50:32 am
Lightpaw smelled the patrol before she saw them. She bounded towards the entrance and waited there.
When the patrol came in, Lightpaw could see the exhaustion in their faces. Fernslip ran out with a bundle of herbs. On some of the cats' back, they were carrying.......... something. Fox? Did BlazeClan cats even eat fox?
The patrol wordlessly placed the thing in the middle of the camp. Lightpaw gasped.
Chapter 5 (Lucky I'm not leaving you on a cliffhanger here.)
"No, no!" Lightpaw yelled as she bounded towards Patchfur's body. "No, Patchfur, wake up. Wake up!" she screamed.
"Lightpaw, I'm so sorry," Echostar mewed. "He died protecting me. Without his help, I would've lost a life."
Birchsong padded up towards Patchfur's body. "My son." she wailed.
Echostar leaped onto the Highledge. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey come gather beneath the Highledge to hear what I have to say."
The remaining cats piled out of their dens and crowded around Echostar, shocked at the sight of Patchfur's dead body.
"Today, Patchfur has died defending me from the fox. I would have lost a life," Echostar announced. "May StarClan light your path, Patchfur,as you walk the skies to join them. May you find good hunting, swift running, and shelter when you sleep."
Reply
Brightflower
10/21/2014 10:49:13 am
(Accidentally hit reply..... gonna continue the story)
Echostar leaped off the Highledge and padded over to Patchfur's body. She started to share tongues with Patchfur for the last time. Lightpaw followed suit.
Most of the warriors padded over and started to sit vigil for Patchfur.
'This is going to be a long night,' Lightpaw thought.
Lightpaw almost fell asleep during the vigil, but she managed to pull through till dawn. She padded towards her den to sleep, but Echostar stopped her.
"Wait, you need a new mentor," Echostar mewed as she jumped onto the Highledge. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey come gather beneath the Highledge to hear what I have to say."
The cats padded out of their dens and looked up at Echostar.
"Now that Patchfur is with StarClan, Lightpaw needs a new mentor," Echostar mewed. "Your mentor will be Crowpelt. I hope Crowpelt will pass down all he knows to you." she turned to Crowpelt.
"Crowpelt, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from Thornspots, and you have shown yourself to be caring and reliable. You will be the mentor of Lightpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Lightpaw."
Reply
Finchwing
10/21/2014 10:56:00 am
Okay for the third time I've tried to post this but It just deletes itself!
I just hate myself for being so clumsy! So, I decided to just stop the Finchwings calling thing. I know it was... really really really bad. Saying no to that?! It's just stupid. So without further a do...
THE CLANS ENDS
By:Finchwing
prologue
"Come down to me," a voice ordered. Several cats suddenly appeared through the bracken. Their fur transparent. "What is it this time Firestar," a golden furred cat asked. "It was a long time ago when the dark forest attacked," Firestar explained,"and soon they will rise once more." The cats started to talk about what was just said. "Only one cat can save us," Firestar continued. A picture of a tiny golden kit appeared in front of the cats. "Why him," a cat asked. "It is beyond starclan to know why," a black cat growled. "Oh Crowfeather stop being so serious," a brown cat complained. "Like you should care Leafpool,"Crowfeather mumbled. "The sun is the path to saving the clans," Firestar spoke. That was the prophecy.
Just tell me if you want me to continue the Finchwings calling.
Reply
Brightflower
10/21/2014 02:23:25 pm
For Finchwing's Calling, maybe you could skip ahead a couple of moons in the story and continue from there 'cause we really don't want to hear about life as a kittypet for eons.
Also, The Clans Ends sounds like a pretty good fanfic to me.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/21/2014 09:19:28 pm
yes i really like the end of the clans!!!
Is the kit (Sunkit?) going to be a descendant of Lionblaze and Cinderheart?
Because golden...
and that would make sense...
and could you tell how it is in Starclan with
Graystripe and Millie AND Silverstream
And Crowfeather and Leafpool AND Feathertail...
And JEEZE THIS IS COMLICATED
Hawkpelt
10/21/2014 09:13:27 pm
Definently! I read all the stories...
Do you guys like mine?
Reply
Brightflower
10/22/2014 06:40:15 am
I LOVE all the stories you wrote, especially the one where there's a epilogue of ThunderClan, the one where Hollykit becomes Hollyshade. THAT IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE. IT'S SO CREATIVE. I never would've thought of that.
Reply
Brightflower
10/22/2014 07:05:57 am
Lightstar's Path
Crowpelt padded over to Lightpaw. "Why don't you get some rest. You should be quite tired after Patchfur's vigil."
Lightpaw nodded her thanks and slowly made her way to the apprentices' den. As she walked by the clearing, she saw Birchsong, Sagewhisker, and Weaselpelt spread rosemary and mint over Patchfur's body, then carry it out of the camp to bury.
Lightpaw settled into her den, where she slumbered into a deep sleep.
Chapter 5
When Lightpaw opened her eyes, she saw lush, green grass and bright, clear ponds. In the distance, she saw a thick furred gray tom in the distance. Wait, was that Patchfur?
"Patchfur!" Lightpaw called out as she bounded towards the cat.
"Oh, Lightpaw, did you think I would really leave you?" Patchfur mewed. "I'll always be there to help you up here in StarClan."
"There must be something important you have to tell me if you came to visit me in a dream," Lightpaw mewed.
"Right," Patchfur mewed. "At dusk, something will happen that should never have happened. We don't know what's going on, but destinies are going out of control."
"Wait, what do you mean?" Lightpaw asked.
"Well, for example, I wasn't supposed to die," Patchfur mewed. "Echostar was supposed to lose a life. You see, this could impact all the Clans and wipe them from the face of the lake."
"Is anything going to happen today?" Lightpaw wondered aloud.
"One thing StarClan knows now is that Suntail's kitting will begin at dusk, even though she's not expecting for another two moons."
"What?!" Lightpaw exclaimed. "Patchfur, is this the work of the Place of No Stars?"
"No, it's something much worse than that, Lightpaw. Somecat is meddling with the paws of fate, creating chaos in the other Clans. Look, here's RushClan."
Patchfur pointed his tail at the pool. The water rippled, then showed the RushClan camp. There was the body of......... Lightpaw squinted harder. Snailstar!
"Snailstar was on his last life, but he wasn't supposed to come here until many, many moons later. Flailwing is going to get him."
"What am I supposed to do?"
"Remember what Lilyfoot told you? The prophecy?"
"So I'm supposed to stop this thing."
"You won't be alone, Lightpaw. Cats will be there to help you, although some will be the ones you don't expect," Patchfur mewed, "Also, some cats aren't really what they seem to be. You must go now. It's almost dusk. Help Suntail." Patchfur and StarClan started to fade.
"Wait, wait!"
"Lightpaw, you've been sleeping for a long time. No more waits!" Instead of Patchfur, Crowpelt was standing at the entrance of the apprentices den. "Get something to eat, and we'll be joining a training session with Larkpaw and your brother, Darkpaw."
Lightpaw reluctantly stepped out of the den.
Reply
Brightflower
10/22/2014 12:22:26 pm
When Lightpaw returned to camp, it was almost dusk. The whole Clan was sharing tongues. Lightpaw spotted Suntail going into the nursery with her swollen belly, and was reminded of Patchfur's message. She started to pad to Fernslip.
"Hey, where are you going?" Darkpaw asked.
"Uh, just going to talk to Fernslip over there," Lightpaw said.
"Well, come eat with me when you're done," Darkpaw mewed and walked over to the freshkill pile.
Lightpaw padded over to Fernslip's side. "Uh, Fernslip, I need to tell you something."
"Are you all right? Is anyone hurt?" Fernslip asked.
"Well, somecat's going to not be all right in a few heartbeats," Lightpaw mewed as she explained her dream to Fernslip.
Fernslip paused. "I will trust you," she said as she went to get herbs.
"Why?" Lightpaw asked, following Fernslip.
"Because you, Lightpaw, are part of the prophecy," she replied. Lightpaw didn't ask how she knew because Lightpaw knew that Lilyfoot told her the prophecy herself.
"All right, I'm going to the nursery-," Fernslip started to say but was interrupted by a piercing scream from the nursery. "You were right after all," Fernslip muttered as she raced towards the nursery. Lightpaw padded over to the freshkill pile, grabbed a mouse, and sat next to Darkpaw.
"Hey, you know what's going on with Suntail?" Darkpaw asked.
"I think she's kitting," Lightpaw replied.
"Already? It's only been three moons," Darkpaw mewed.
"I have to tell you something, Darkpaw," Lightpaw whispered.
"What?" Darkpaw whispered back.
"I'm part of a prophecy."
"Really? Am I in in it?"
"Not exactly, but I'm going to need your help when I need it."
"Okay. Thanks for telling me," Darkpaw mewed.
Lightpaw saw Thrushcloud run over to the nursery entrance. He waited anxiously as Suntail shrieked in pain.
A few heartbeats later, Fernslip poked her head out the den. "You can come in now, Thrushcloud."
Thrushcloud nodded in reply and rushed into the nursery. The mewling of kits was audible in the camp.
"Now we can play with more kits!" Lightpaw heard Runningkit say.
"We have to wait until they're strong enough," Brackenkit replied.
'Well, at least Suntail's safe now,' Lightpaw thought.
(THE NEXT DAY)
Lightpaw padded out of the apprentices den. She had just woken and wanted to see the kits. Thrushcloud was sitting outside the den.
"Can I see the kits?" Lightpaw asked Thrushcloud.
"Sure, when Echostar's finished," replied Thrushcloud.
Lightpaw waited patiently until Echostar emerged from the den. She then slipped inside the nursery.
Lightpaw was greeted by two kits. "What are their names?" Lightpaw asked.
"Waterkit and Duckkit," Suntail replied. "Waterkit is the ginger she-cat, and Duckkit is the long furred brown, creamy tom. Aren't they cute?"
"Yeah," Lightpaw mewed. She noticed that the kits didn't have Thrushcloud's features. Although they shared Suntail's ice blue eyes and sleek fur, they didn't have Thrushcloud's white tipped ears or his white paws. Maybe they shared Thrushcloud's toughness later on.
"I'd better get going now, Crowpelt wants me to gather moss for the elders today," Lightpaw mewed as she exited the den.
"Come visit them soon!" Suntail replied.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/23/2014 05:31:18 am
Awesome story!!
And thanks for the compliment :3
It makes me so happy
Reply
Brightflower
10/23/2014 06:49:47 am
Thanks Hawkpelt! :3
Chapter 6
Lightpaw scraped the moss of the tree and rolled it into a ball. She then rolled the ball to the pile of moss.
"This is really, fun. I'd love to do this every day," Larkpaw mewed sarcastically.
"Well, the elders do appreciate it. I would if I was an elder," Darkpaw replied.
"I guess, but it's still not an apprentice's favorite job," Hawkpaw mewed. "I wonder what our mentor's are doing?"
Lightpaw had noticed earlier that Crowpelt, Archfoot, Gorsepelt, and Dewclaw (Darkpaw's mentor) had left them gathering moss while they did something else.
"I think they're nearby, though," Lightpaw mewed. "They wouldn't leave us at least three foxtails away from them."
"Yeah, maybe," Larkpaw replied. "I wonder why we all are gathering moss, though. There's only three elders, and usually all of us are doing something else right now, like battle training, hunting, patrolling, gathering herbs for Fernslip, and so on."
"Yeah, good point," Darkpaw mewed. "I think something strange is going on."
At Darkpaw's remark, Lightpaw remembered Patchfur's words. Maybe destiny was getting out of hand again.
"I think we have enough moss for three elders anyway," Lightpaw mewed. "We should get back to camp."
The four apprentices picked up the balls of moss and headed for camp.
When they entered the camp, Lightpaw noticed that the cats were murmuring to themselves. Suddenly Hatchclaw hissed, arching his back. "Invaders!" he shouted.
"What are you talking about, Hatchclaw?" Beechwhisker asked, confused.
"Don't you see? They're BlazeClan apprentices! On RushClan territory!"
"What?" Mothpelt mewed. "Um, Hatchclaw, you're a BlazeClan cat."
"Don't offend me like that, Minnowpelt," Hatchclaw mewed, his eyes wild. "I'm RushClan!"
The apprentices were frozen in place, moss still in their mouths. Lightpaw put her moss down and faced Hatchclaw. "Hatchclaw, snap out of it!"
Hatchclaw looked confused for a moment, his eyes misty. Then he shook his head, and looked up. "Hey, why's everycat looking at me?"
Lightpaw noticed Mothpelt disappear into Echostar's den. Then Mothpelt emerged from her den. "Hatchclaw, Echostar would like to see you."
"I hope I'm not in trouble," he muttered to himself before padding to Echostar's den.
Lightpaw and Darkpaw headed towards the freshkill pile after a long day of training. Lightpaw had managed to master the new defense for the underbelly scratch, but not before Hawkpaw had managed to do the underbelly slash ten times. She sighted. It’d been a long day.
“Hey, Lightpaw and Darkpaw!” Crowpelt meowed. “Echostar wants you two to go to the Gathering today.”
“Thanks,” Darkpaw replied.
Lightpaw picked up a mole, and Darkpaw selected a mouse. As they headed towards the apprentices’ den, Lightpaw noticed Runningpaw and Fuzzypaw eating a shrew together.
“How’s your second day as an apprentice?” Darkpaw asked.
“Great!” Runningpaw replied. “Petalsplash showed me the territory.”
“Yeah!” Fuzzypaw mewed. “Sedgefall taught me the front paw blow.”
“Did you check on Brackenpaw?” Lightpaw asked.
“Yeah, he said being a medicine cat apprentice is fun, but all I see is herbs all day,” Runningpaw replied.
“I wonder if he’s going to see StarClan?” Fuzzypaw wondered aloud.
Lightpaw and Darkpaw left the two new apprentices alone and settled in the shady part of the camp.
“When do you think we’re going to be warriors?” Darkpaw asked.
“I think when Hawkpaw and Larkpaw are warriors. I think they’ve already had their assessment, and maybe their ceremony’s going to be a quarter moon after the Gathering.” Lightpaw replied.
Lightpaw and Darkpaw chatted for a while until Echostar appeared out of her den. “It’s time to go to the Gathering.”
Lightpaw and Darkpaw got up and followed Echostar out of camp.
“SwiftClan is doing well, with newleaf bringing in the abundant prey. Although there were kittypets getting too curious about our territory, we showed them that this is still our home.” Ryestar mewed.
“NightClan will increase its border patrols to make sure none of you are straying over the border,” Hollystar mewed, looking at RushClan.
“BlazeClan is doing well. The three kits born by Marigoldfang are now Runningpaw, Fuzzypaw, and Brackenpaw,” Echostar announced. “Also, Whitepaw and Mistpaw are now Whitenose and Mistpelt.”
“Whitenose! Mistpelt! Whitenose! Mistpelt!” the Clans cheered.
“Patchfur has also joined StarClan.”
Lightpaw noticed murmurs among the cats. ‘Looks like Patchfur was a respected cat among ALL the Clans.’
“One last thing,” Echostar added, “BlazeClan has new kits, thanks to Suntail. Waterkit and Duckkit!”
Lightpaw noticed Tallspots of RushClan look extremely proud at that statement……. Almost like he was the father of those kits. Was he?
Minnowstar of RushClan started to speak. “Sadly, Snailstar has lost his last life and is in StarClan now. I have become leader and have received my nine lives.”
“Minnowstar! Minnowstar!” the Clans cheered.
“I have appointed Thistlewing as my deputy.”
“Thistlewing! Thistlewing!”
“The prey is running well,” Minnowstar finished.
“This Gathering is concluded,” Ryestar announced as she leaped off the Great Trees.
“Wow, looks like BlazeClan’s getting all the good luck, with plentiful prey, new kits, new warriors, and new apprentices!” Darkpaw mewed.
“Yeah,” Lightpaw replied. She felt that this was destiny unbalanced. The other Clans should have more kits, apprentices, and warriors as well.
“You know, this destiny thing’s harder than I thought,” Lightpaw muttered to herself.
Reply
Brightflower
10/25/2014 07:36:16 am
Okay, so here's the names that I like (some I made up)
If you have any more ideas, leave a comment. Their warrior ceremonies are coming soon!
Hawkpelt
10/26/2014 08:10:01 am
I like Lightsong and ,,, Darkwing
Reply
Braveflame
10/26/2014 08:13:44 am
"That's enough training for today," said Cloudpelt. He turned and walked briskly through the trees, not waiting for Hedgepaw.
Muttering, the apprentice followed him. Suddenly, she tripped.
"Mousedung!" she spat. "What WAS that?"
Turning, she saw the stone that had caused her to fall. Looking closer, she saw something etched on it.
"What is that?" she murmured, peering closer still.
She gasped. A cloud and a leaf were scratched side by side onto the rock.
Reply
Brightflower
10/27/2014 08:13:43 am
Chapter 9
Lightpaw woke to the sound of playing kits. She climbed out of her nest and padded out of the apprentice’s den. Darkpaw and Larkpaw were eating a shrew together, Waterkit and Duckkit were playfighting, Brackenpaw was sorting herbs, and Runningpaw and Fuzzypaw were eating a thrush. Lightpaw padded over to Darkpaw and Larkpaw.
“What do you think we’re doing today?” Lightpaw asked.
“I think we’re going to practice the Lightning Strike,” Larkpaw replied. “I heard about it, but never got to learn it.”
“Or maybe we’re just doing regular apprentice things,” Darkpaw mewed,” such as patrolling, hunting, gathering moss, and other kinds of things.”
Lightpaw nodded and went to the freshkill pile. Just as she was about to make a selection, Lightpaw smelled NightClan scent among BlazeClan scent. What happened?
“Echostar!” Lightpaw heard Stormpelt meow. “Hollystar and Beavertail here want to talk to you.”
Echostar appeared from her den and mewed,” All right, Stormpelt. Please come inside my den.”
Lightpaw saw Hollystar and Beavertail disappear into Echostar’s den. She picked up a starling and padded back over to Darkpaw and Larkpaw. “What do you think’s going on?” Lightpaw asked.
“I don’t know,” Larkpaw mewed,” Maybe something happened to NightClan, something that wasn’t supposed to happen.”
Echostar, Hollystar, and Beavertail emerged from her den a few moments later. “My decision is no, and it’s final.”
“Very well. Watch your back, Echostar. Something big is happening, and you’re ignoring it. Ignoring the word of StarClan!”
The BlazeClan cats all had very confused and scared looks on their faces. Lightpaw could see Echostar trying to maintain her composure. “I know what matters most for my Clan, StarClan or no StarClan. You may step off our territory now. Stormpelt, Archfoot, and Dewclaw, please escort these cats back towards the NightClan border.”
The escort patrol made their way towards Hollystar and Beavertail, and walked out the entrance.
“Do you think anything’s going to happen to us?” Larkpaw asked.
“I don’t know, but whatever it is, BlazeClan will be prepared." Lightpaw replied.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/28/2014 06:52:55 am
OK I just remembered Sweetpaw...
So
2 MOONS LATER
"From this day forward, you shall be known as Sweetblaze. Starclan honors your skills and bravery."
"Sweetblaze! Reedflower!" cheered the clan.
As the new warriors stepped down from the Highrock,Pineflight walked up to her and purred. "I can't believe your a warrior!"
"Oh, shut up, you silly furball!"
As the brown tom walked away, Reedflower padded over. "So, now that your a warrior, you two can be mates," she teased.
"Oh, no, we are definently just friends."
Reedflower became serious. "Don't be silly. He obviously likes you."
Ok I made up Pineflight cuz there was no boy warriors her age
so please continue!!!!
Reply
Brightflower
10/28/2014 07:27:26 am
When we last left, a ginger shecat's kits were missing.
“All right, then,” Gorsepelt replied as he checked over Hawkpaw’s pelt.
Larkpaw and Hawkpaw sprang away from their parents and hurried to sit next to Lightpaw and Darkpaw.
“Now, that your grooming session’s over, we get to wait for Echostar,” Darkpaw mewed.
“I’m so excited!” Hawkpaw exclaimed. “We’re getting our warrior names! I bet mine’s gonna be Hawkpelt.” (Sorry, Hawkpelt, it’s a different warrior name!)
“Well, Echostar’s coming out of her den now,” Larkpaw mewed. (It seems like Echostar’s always in her den.)
“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Highledge to hear what I have to say,” Echostar meowed.
The cats that weren’t already gathered around came and sat next to the Highledge.
“BlazeClan is thriving, and with our good luck, we have two more apprentices about to become warriors. Hawkpaw and Larkpaw, come forward.”
“Good luck!” Lightpaw whispered as Hawkpaw and Larkpaw stepped into the clearing.
“I, Echostar, leader of BlazeClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to-,” Echostar mewed but was interrupted by Gorsepelt.
“Trespassers!” Gorsepelt managed to mew before the hollow was swarmed by rouges.
‘What in StarClan’s name is going on?’ Lightpaw wondered.
Reply
Brightflower
10/29/2014 08:22:56 am
Chapter 11
“Who are you?” Echostar asked. “Why do you dare enter our camp without notice?”
A thin, short-furred, dark, tawny brown tom with pale yellow eyes stepped forward. “My name is Rain, and we have come to punish those who disobey.”
Echostar’s fur bristled, but she kept her composure, “Just because I declined your offer does not mean that you have the right to do anything to BlazeClan.”
“Do you know who we are?” Rain mewed. “We are rouges, coming to obey the Dark Forest’s will. You will pay the price!” he said as he pounced on Mothpelt. (Ok, so I said that the DF wasn’t to blame, but I still wanted it to be part of the story. It’s not entirely their fault anyway. Don’t question my decisions!)
That started a battle. A brown and white she-cat jumped on top of Larkpaw. Lightpaw raced to her side, jumped on top of the brown and white she-cat, and started to claw her ears. The cat shrieked in agony but held on to Larkpaw. Lightpaw then slammed her forepaw down hard onto the cat’s head. The cat let go of Larkpaw and raced out of camp.
“Thanks!” Larkpaw mewed.
The two cats then sprang over to Suntail, who was desperately trying to block the nursery entrance. The two kits were cowering inside the den. Lightpaw slid under a cream furred cat and raked her claws under the cat’s belly. The cat howled in pain, and ran off towards the exit.
“Thank StarClan you’re here!” Suntail mewed while batting away a tabby tom. “I was almost overwhelmed.”
The battle continued on until Lightpaw heard Rain laughing. The rouges and BlazeClan cats stopped their fighting and looked to see what was going on. Lightpaw saw Rain holding Echostar under his claws.
“You can’t kill me!” Echostar meowed. “I’ll be stronger when I return!”
“Oh, but you see, this cat called Scourge taught me how to do the Killing Stroke. Do you know what it does, Echostar?”
Echostar’s eyes widened. “You wouldn’t!”
“I am going to now,” Rain mewed. He lifted up a paw, claws gleaming with blood.
“Stop!” Mothpelt cried and surged towards Rain.
“Hold him down,” Rain mewed. Two cats sprang on top of Mothpelt. “Anyone else?”
Silence rang in the hollow. “Good,” Rain said as he swiped his claws into Echostar’s throat and belly. “Goodbye, Echostar.”
Rain stepped off of Echostar. She was convulsing and trying to breathe. After a few heartbeats, she lay still on the ground.
“Echostar!” Mothpelt screamed. He struggled free of his captors and raced towards Echostar’s body. “Echostar, wake up. It’s just a dream. Please wake up!”
When her body didn’t stir, Mothpelt stood in shock. The Clan cats were silenced, too scared to speak.
“Well, looks like our job here’s over. Come on,” Rain mewed casually as he flicked his tail.
The rouges followed him out of the hollow. It was then that Mothpelt started to speak.
“Echostar was a great leader,” he mewed. “She shouldn’t have been killed. We must have revenge!” (In case you didn’t notice, Echostar and Mothpelt are mates)
He leaped onto the Highledge. “I say these words before StarClan, so that the spirits of our warrior ancestors may hear and approve of my choice. The next deputy of BlazeClan is Beechwhisker
“I’m going to receive my nine lives,” he continued, “and swear to kill Rain myself. But for now, we must sit vigil for Echostar. Hawkpaw and Larkpaw, you’ll get your warrior names after my nine lives ceremony.”
Lightpaw dragged her paws to Echostar’s body. Blood covered her brown, tabby fur. Her eyes stared off into space. Mothpelt licked them closed and started to share tongues with her for the last time.
‘Destiny is becoming a real threat now,’ Lightpaw thought. ‘I must stop it before it gets out of paw!’
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/29/2014 08:31:24 am
but in the story
waywayway back
it said Sharpstorm was a girl...
that's why i made Pineclaw
but IDC cuz Sharpstorm is cool
Reply
Hailstrike
10/29/2014 08:40:44 am
if you don't mind my skippng...
1 MOON LATER
"Sweetblaze! Really?"
"Yes, I can't believe it either!"
"Can't believe what?"
Lakestar padded up to Sweetblaze and Reedflower.
"Sweetblaze is expecting Sharpstorm's kits!" gushed Reedflower.
Pineclaw looked up from the freshkill-pile.
"WHAT?!"
The other cats took no notice, with clanmates swarming around Sweetblaze.
"When are you moving to the nursery?"
"Are you excited?"
"Congratulations!"
Sharpstorm's sister, Jumpheart, pressed to the front of the crowd. "Does Sharpstorm know?"
"Do I know what?"
Sweetblaze's mate was in the entrance tunnel, holding a sparrow.
"That Sweetblaze is expecting your kits!"
Sharpstorm dropped his prey.
Reply
Brightflower
10/30/2014 07:46:16 am
"What!" Sharpstorm exclaimed as he rushed over towards Sweetblaze. "Oh, StarClan! We're going to have kits! We'll raise them and......."
Sweetblaze had noticed Pineclaw looking angry, and he was pawing at the freshkill pile.
"And then," Sharpstorm continued,"They're going to be the best FlameClan warriors ever!"
Sweetblaze suddenly felt tired. "Hey, everybody, I know this is news, but I'm a little tired. I'm going to sleep." She padded towards the warriors den.
"No, Sweetblaze, you have to sleep in the nursery now, you're a queen!" Sharpstorm protested.
"Alright. I'll see what it's like in there," Sweetblaze mewed as she changed direction and padded towards the nursery.
"This is going to be great, having kits and all that," Sweetblaze muttered to herself.
Reply
Finchwing
10/30/2014 11:21:52 am
Ummmmmm... well so I get the idea you want me to do the end of the clans. Sooooooooo, how about The End of the Clans but the kit is really supposed to be Finchkit. Just ummmmmm go with it. The prologue doesn't really matter.
Reply
Hawkpelt
10/30/2014 09:15:22 pm
OK
but pleas tell what happens with all those mates and ex-mates in Starclan...
AND CONTINUE THE ALICE STORY!!!
Reply
Braveflame
10/30/2014 09:18:31 pm
Luckily, there was a spare nest in the nursery.
*I'll clean it out tomorrow* thought Sweetblaze as she curled into it and fell asleep.
She woke up to a terrible screech.
Sharpstorm!!
Reply
Tigerleap
10/30/2014 09:20:45 pm
Dashing out of the nursery, she gasped. Pineclaw was standing over Sharpstorm, who was trying to bat him off with his hind legs.
Pineclaw leaned in to bite his throat.
"PINECLAW! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!?" Yowled Lakestar.
Reply
Finchwing
11/2/2014 03:30:25 am
End of the clans
BTW this has been the 1,000,000th time I've tried to post this. : ( : (
chapter 13
Finchpaw ran through the bracken back to where Rainclan (I'm changing the clans) camp was. He realized after one night he had made a terrible mistake. Rats were chasing him too, they had followed him from a dark alley in the twolegplace. As he broke into camp he heard Deepstar's voice,"Finchpaw, I thought I told you to leave."
"You did but I now realize I was wrong to say no," Finchpaw explained,"I just was so worried I couldn't help because I'm so young." Then, behind Finchpaw rats started to appear. "Rainclan, we're under attack by rats," Deepstar announced. Cats started rushing out of their dens prepared to fight. Finchpaw was shocked the rats got into camp and ran into his den quickly.
Outside, Deepstar and Marshfur were fighting rats on the highrock while the rest of the clan fought below. Softpaw and Shadepaw also had ran right into the medicine cat den. They looked suprised when they saw their brother. "Finchpaw," Shadepaw paused,"it's you, I was so worried about you even though it was only one night!" Finchpaw licked his pelt,"I know, but you don't need me, I only made things worse." "Then go help you furball," Softpaw teased.
Finchpaw knew Softpaw was right so he immediatly went out to fight. He nearly killed a whole group of rats in the clearing. He was turning repeatedly to fight the rats around him. In a flash, the rats were all dead. Finchpaw looked around to see the clan was seriously injured. Marshfur, Fuzzpelt, Deepstar, Wetpaw, Harmonyfang, and... Coldwhisker!
Finchpaw stared in horror when he saw Deepstars angry face looking right at him. "In my den now," he growled.
chapter 14
Finchpaw stepped into Deepstar's den to see Deepstar looking calm. "Finchpaw, I know it is hard for you to do these things for your clan but you must understand it is your destiny," Deepstar said. "I know and I shouldn't have led the rats here even if it was an accident," Finchpaw appoligized.
"Then I think it's time for the clan to have a new full medicine cat," Deepstar said cheerfully. Finchpaw nodded then padded outside. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting," Deepstar announced. As the clan started to get below the highrock Weatheredstone appeared.
"Finchpaw do you accept to heal Rainclan at whatever cost," Deepstar went through the ceremony. "I do," accepted Finchpaw. "Then from this day forward you shall be known as Finchwing," Deepstar announced. "Finchwing, Finchwing, Finchwing," the clann cheered.
Finchwing felt relieved that he was back in his clan, but he still had to solve the puzzle. So he got back to his den and thought while healing the wounded cats. He hadn't even realized the infection on Coldwhiskers foot until she started moaning. Then, he started to panic. He ran around trying to find some Burdock root for the bite but there was none in the store.
"Here have these," he said while handing her some poppy seeds. He also put cobweb onto the bite to stop the bleeding. Coldwhisker sighed with relief beforew falling to sleep. When he was done he curled up in his nest waiting to fall asleep.
But he couldn't, he sat for at least til midnight before he heard thumping in the clearing. He crept out of his nest and took a peak at what was happening. He gasped when he saw Searblaze and Rimflow with Marshfur. Finchwing leaped out,"stop!" Marshfur looked worried,"Finchwing help me!" "Don't listen to him," Searblaze shouted,"we're trying to warn him about Fear!" "Well this sounds interesting," Finchwing calmed.
"He's trying to end the clans," Rimflow said,"he's doing it by taking control of cats when they're angry and killing other cats!" They let Marshfur go and started to sit in a circle. "Why," Marshfur asked. "Because he wants revenge on the clans for something they did a long time ago," answered Searblaze. "I think it had something to do with two cats: Tigerstar and Firestar," Rimflow added. Finchwwing was curious but afraid,"I think you should go before another cat sees you." Searblaze nodded then started to fade with Rimflow.
Finchwing stepped back to his nest and curled up in it. What possibly could have happened? Then, Darkness fell over him...
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Hawkpelt
11/3/2014 05:30:48 am
"He stole my mate!" yowled Pineclaw.
Lakestar yanked Pineclaw off Sharpstorm and looked into his eyes.
"Pineclaw, don't be like the old clans... don't be like Ashfur."
To Sweetblaze's horror, Pineclaw lunged at Lakestar and sunk his teeth into his throat.
"NO!" screeched Reedflower. Sweetblaze glanced at her, but she was already charging towards the toms.
Reply
Brightflower
11/3/2014 08:09:28 am
"Pineclaw, stop!" Sweetblaze yelled as she pounced on Pineclaw and tore him away from Lakestar.
It was too late. Lakestar began to convulse on the floor, and then he was still.
"Does Lakestar have any more lives left?" Jumpheart asked Rainpetal.
"A few more to serve his Clan," Rainpetal answered as she shot a glance at Pineclaw.
Lakestar woke up a few heartbeats later. He got up and walked slowly to the Highledge. He still had blood splattered all over his throat.
"Cats of FlameClan, you have seen what greed and jealousy can do to a cat's heart. Pineclaw, you had no reason what so ever to attack your Clan leader like that, even if you were mad at Sharpstorm." Lakestar mewed.
He turned his gaze towards the Clan. "You all can decide what Pineclaw's fate is. Shall he be banished, or shall he be killed? You decide. Bluecloud, take a few warriors and keep Pineclaw confined in the apprentices den."
Bluecloud nodded and turned towards Torntail and Sparkfur. They escorted Pineclaw to the apprentices den.
Reply
Brightflower
11/3/2014 08:10:38 am
Actually, change Sweetblaze to Reedflower.
Brightflower
11/3/2014 08:22:21 am
As in "Pineclaw, stop!" Reedflower yelled as she pounced on Pineclaw and tor him away from Lakestar.
Brightflower
11/3/2014 08:21:46 am
Chapter 15
Mothpelt’s POV
“We’re almost there,” Fernslip mewed. “Are you ready?”
Mothpelt didn’t know how to answer. “I’m a bit…… unprepared, but ready to serve,” he mewed honestly.
“Look, I know Echostar’s death was pretty hard for you, but you have to support the Clan and get them out of their greif,” Fernslip mewed gently. “The Clan needs you.”
“All right.”
“We’re here now,” Fernslip mewed. “Just touch your nose to the water.”
Mothpelt lied down on the cold, stone floor and dipped his nose into the Moonpool. He opened his eyes and found himself on the island.
“Welcome, Mothpelt.”
Mothpelt turned his head and found Echostar sitting right behind him.
“Are you ready to receive you nine lives?” Echostar asked.
“Yes.”
“All right, then. I give you a life for hope. Even on the darkest night, you will find it there.”
Mothpelt felt himself feeling jubilant. He felt like he could see the good through all the bad.
As the ceremony continued, Mothpelt felt more and more confident of himself.
“I hail you by your new name, Mothstar. Your old life is no more. You have now received the nine lives of a leader, and StarClan grants you the guardianship of BlazeClan. Defend it well; care for the young and old; honor your ancestorsand the traditions of the warrior code; live each life with pride and dignity.”
“Mothstar! Mothstar! Mothstar!”
Mothstar now felt prepared to take on Rain. “I will avenge your death, Echostar, and take on Rain myself.”
Echostar’s gaze darkened. “You don’t have to,” she mewed. “There are other important things to do as leader.”
“I will, one day!”
Reply
Hailstorm
11/3/2014 08:21:06 pm
Meanwhile, Sweetblaze turned to Reedflower.
"Why did you-"
"I'm expecting Lakestar's kits," said Reedflower.
"WHAT?" cried Sweetblaze. "I thought he had a mate!"
Reedflower shook her head.
"WEll..." said Sweetblaze. "That's great! Our kits can grow up together!"
Reply
Brightflower
11/4/2014 09:29:54 am
"I had no idea. How long were you and Lakestar mates?" Sweetblaze asked when they both moved into the nursery.
"Since about three moons ago. It seems really strange, doesn't it?" Reedflower responded.
"You know, it really stinks that we can't go on patrol or hunt anymore. All we do is sit here and act like helpless cats." Sweetblaze mewed.
"When the kits come, it'll all be worth it," Reedflower said. "Besides, we get the first pick from the freshkill pile!"
"Well, I guess it isn't all that bad."
Reply
Finchwing
11/4/2014 09:37:13 am
THE END OF THE CLANS!
chapter 15
Finchwing was in a misty swamp. He knew it wasn't starclan... it was the swamp of Fear. Nearby a lump of darkness rose. "You," it shouted,"WHY WHY WHY YOU!" "I know who you are Fear and just to let you know I'll stop you. You took away two of my clan mates and you will pay," Finchwing hissed.
"If you even care you shouldn't have come here... you should have asked your starclan for help,"Fear growled. "Well, I know about Firestar and Tigerstar and," how did he know,"Dovewing Squirrelflight Lionblaze Jayfeather and Leafpool!" Fear's eyes widened revealing bright red glowing eyes. "How,"Fear asked. "By my starclan,"Finchwing mocked. Fear hissed.
Then, a cat appeared in the mist... Marshfur! "NO," Finchwing shouted blocking Fear's eyes. He knew he would take control of Marshfur by staring into his eyes. Marshfur looked frightened and Finchwing knew he was going o have to sacrafice himself. Fear's eyes already danced with sparks and suddenly white light filled Finchwing's eyes.
Was he dying? He couldn't be! All of his work of... well not much, would be down the drain. Finchwing knew when Fear spoke,"well now two cats will be under my control!" Finchwing winced. Marshfur would be killed too! He basically was dying.
Finchwing suddenly woke up. His eyes were bloodshot. He couldn't tell but he thought he saw a cat. A glowing cat! But, it wasn't a starclan warrior. She didn't speak but her eyes told him to calm down. "Who are you," he asked. "I am Light," she spoke,"I was the last starclan warrior to die. I was Spottedleaf." Finchwing stared. This cat was impossible. Then, light started to flood into his den and Light waved goodbye.
chapter 16
Finchwing was tired at sunhigh. He really had no sleep at all! His visions and dreams were real. He padded out of camp early for burdock and was pacing through the bracken when he remembered. Marshfur! A cry flew out of camp and Finchwing knew. Goodbye Marshfur, Finchwing thought sadly. When would it be him? Then again he had the best temper of any cat in Rainclan.
It was no suprise when he got back to camp when he saw a limp body on the ground. But it was a suprise to see who it was. Sleeteye. Finchwing whirled around camp. Where was Marshfur? Cats stirred around but he couldn't see Marshfur or his body. Then, he walked into his den.
A cat was standing there and it immediately pieced his throat. "Marshfur,"Finchwing gasped,"no, don't do it!" "WHY,"shouted Marshfur,"YOU KNOW I CAN"T CONTROL IT FINCHWING, AND IT WILL SAVE THE WHOLE CLAN IF WE"RE BOT DEAD!" Finchwing stared, he was right. Finchwing picked up some death berries. "Eat," he said. Marshfur ate them, but Finchwing didn't. "I'm sorry,"he croaked.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Reply
Brightflower
11/4/2014 10:21:11 am
Chapter 16
"I, Mothstar, leader of BlazeClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior in their turn. Hawkpaw and Larkpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do," Hawkpaw and Larkpaw mewed solemnly.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Hawkpaw, from this moment you will be known as Hawkstorm. StarClan honors your honor and ambition, and we welcome you as a full warrior of BlazeClan. Larkpaw, from this moment you will be known as Larktail. StarClan honors your loyalty and respect, and we welcome you as a full warrior of BlazeClan."
“Hawkstorm! Larktail! Hawkstorm! Larktail!”
Lightpaw bounded towards the two newly made warriors. “Congradulations!” she exclaimed. “It won’t be long before I join you!”
“Thanks, Lightpaw,” Hawkstorm mewed. “I’m not looking forward to the vigil, though.”
“It’ll be worth it because we’re warriors!” Larktail exclaimed. “I hope Lightpaw’s going to be a warrior soon.”
“Me too,” Lightpaw mewed.
Reply
Hawkpelt
11/5/2014 06:29:31 am
FINCHWING!!! HELP US!!!
1 moon later... (i think, not sure how long cats expect kits)
"There you go, Sweetblaze!"
She sighed in relief and began to lick her kits, 2 toms and a she-cat.
Reedflower admired them. "Your'e so lucky," she sighed wistfully.
Reedflower had had 3 kits too, but Swallowkit and Shalekit had died from greencough, leaving only Rosekit.
Reply
Finchwing
11/5/2014 10:07:31 am
I like the Sweetblaze story... but I came in late and don't know a lot and I'm not reading the whole entire thing! Sorry but if you would just tell me what I need to know I will.
soooooo...
"Thank you,"Sweetblaze thanked,"and I'm so sorry about your kits."
"I'm fine,"responded Reedflower.
Reply
Finchwing
11/5/2014 10:37:36 am
THE END OF THE CLANS
chapter 17
Finchwing stood over where Rainclan buried Sleeteye and Marshfur. "I'm so sorry, it's all my fault for not eating the berries,"Finchwing cried. All that came out of this was that Marshfur and Sleeteye would be together forever. Finchwing went up to Deepstar's den after.
When he entered his ear got stuck on a thorn. "AHHH,"screamed Finchwing. His ear pulled back and Finchwing winced. When he broke free and turned around he saw is ear was torn off. Blood trickled down from where his ear used to be. Finchwing stared. He was going half-deaf! A scuttle in the clearing turned into barely a scratch.
Deepstar leaped up right after to sleep. When he came in Finchwing was looking CRAZY. "What happened," Deepstar asked. "My ear got stuck on a big thorn, and it yanked right off,"Finchwing stuttered. Deepstar knew what to do immediatly. He helped Finchwing down to his den and got some cobwebs. "Thanks,"said Finchwing. Finchwing knew his ear would be back in a few moons but he knew it would be a problem.
Finchwing walked outside his den to see something bad was coming. "THE RATS ARE BACK," screamed a cat outside of the camp. Finchwing lept out of camp to come face to face with an army of rats. Oh why did it have to be him?
Finchwing lead the rest of the clan into battle. He fought desperately ignoring the wails of help. He was too busy fighting a plump rat to hear a rat jumping to his back. When it latched on, Finchwing knew he was in trouble. He rolled on his back as quick as a squirrel but didn't make it in time. The rat bit his neck making him screech in pain before falling to the ground.
Finchwing opened his eyes. He wasn't in starclan or the swamp or in battle, he was in Sandclan camp! He stepped outside to see Deepstar talking to Fallenstar. "We can't go back to our camp, can we please stay here for now,"Deepstar begged. "I don't know, I guess if it's just a couple cats from Rainclan,"Fallenstar said. "Only a couple of cats,"asked Finchwing. "Yes the other clanmates went to the other three clans (no one saw that coming!) ," responded Deepstar. "You can stay if you hunt and you,"Fallenstar pointed to Finchwing,"help Knotfur." Finchwing nodded.
As Finchwing went to the warriors den he saw Shadepaw ,Softpaw ,Harmonyfang ,and herkits pace about. Finchwing was satasfied. But where was Coldwhisker?
T.B.C.
Reply
Brightflower
11/5/2014 11:11:33 am
"Sharpstorm, you can come in now!" Rainpetal mewed as she exited the nursery. "I'll be back to check on you," she said to Sweetblaze.
Sharpstorm purred at the sight of the kits. "Look, they look a little like both of us! What should we name them?"
"I was thinking maybe Flowerkit for the tabby and white she cat," Sweetblaze mewed,"and Specklekit for the flecked brown she cat. I still need to come up with one name for the pale gray tom."
"How about Swiftkit?" Sharpstorm mewed.
"That's a great name," Sweetblaze purred as the kits started to suckle.
Reply
Hawkpelt
11/5/2014 08:29:16 pm
just that two of Reedflower's and Lakestar's kits died, and... umm... i guess Pineclaw wuz exiled
Reply
Brightflower
11/9/2014 11:35:07 am
Chapter 17
“Alright, I want Crowpelt, Lightpaw, Whitenose, and Mousetail to patrol the NightClan border,” Beechwhisker mewed as she assigned the patrols.
Crowpelt nodded and beckoned to the announced cats. Lightpaw got up and joined the patrol, and they headed out towards the border.
When they reached the border, they noticed a strange smell. Lightpaw noted that it smelled like a stray cat.
“Crowpelt, do you smell that?” Lightpaw asked.
“Yes. We should track it to see of it’s still in our territory,” Crowpelt responded. “Lead the way, Lightpaw.”
Honored to be the leader, she followed the scent. Soon, she smelled fox.
“Oh, no,” Mousetail mewed. “I thought we drove away that fox ages ago.”
“Well, it’s back now,” Crowpelt responded. “We should carry on and see what’s going on.”
A few fox lengths later, Lightpaw saw a brown she cat hunting a mouse. Behind her, there was a fox. The fox pounced on the she cat.
“Attack that fox!” Crowpelt yelled as he charged towards the fox.
Lightpaw leaped onto the fox’s back and dug her claws into the fox. The fox yelped in pain as the claws came into contact. Whitenose scratched its face. Crowpelt yanked on its tail, and Mousetail wove in and out between the fox’s legs, nipping at them. The brown she cat stared at them with awe.
Crowpelt gave one good bite on the fox’s tail before the fox finally gave up and ran away. Mousetail turned her attention to the brown she cat. “Are you all right?”
“I-I think I’m fine,” she stuttered. “Thanks. That was incredible.”
“What’s your name?” Crowpelt asked.
“Angel.”
“Are there more of you?”
“No, I hunt for myself. Ever since…….,” Angel started to say before hesitating, “something happened. Is it all right if I can stay at your place?”
Crowpelt and Mousetail exchanged glances. “That’s up for our leader to decide,” Crowpelt mewed. “You can come with us, and let her decide.”
Reply
Brightflower
1/14/2015 12:09:54 pm
[I read over my story of Lightstar's Path. I was like, whoa, what? I can write good stories????? Well, I hope you enjoy this chapter]
Chapter 18
As the patrol headed back towards the BlazeClan camp, Crowpelt, Mousetail, Whitenose, and Lightpaw took turns marking the BlazeClan and NightClan border. Angel stood nearby as they did their jobs.
When the patrol arrived at camp, Lightpaw could feel eyes in their direction, looking at Angel. Angel looked down at her paws, and Crowpelt went to look for Mothstar. Whitenose started towards the freshkill pile, and Mousetail went to the warriors den.
“What’s your name?” Angel asked.
“My name is Lightpaw,” Lightpaw replied.
“Wow, that’s an unusual name,” Angel mewed.
“My name will change when I’m a warrior,” Lightpaw said. Seeing the confused expression on her face, Lightpaw added, “Maybe I can explain later.”
After a while, Mothstar padded up towards Lightpaw and Angel. “Crowpelt told me that you want to stay for a while,” Mothstar mewed. “Do you know for how long?”
“Well, um, I, uh……….,” Angel stammered.
“What?” Mothstar asked, a little annoyed.
“Can I join your Clan?”
Mothstar seemed taken aback by this question. After a few heartbeats, he replied, “We’ll see. You have to prove yourself that you can follow the warrior code and provide for this Clan. For now, Lightpaw can show you around, as you both are probably about the same age.”
Lightpaw dipped her head. “Yes, Mothstar.”
As soon as Mothstar padded away, Lightpaw walked over towards the nursery. “Follow me, Angel!”
When Angel caught up to her, Lightpaw spoke, “This is the nursery, where queens live before and after kitting. They care for their kits here until they’re about six moons old.”
“Moons?” Angel asked.
“Every full moon equals one moon,” Lightpaw explained. “Right now, Suntail is in the nursery with her kits, Waterkit and Duckkit. Want to see them?”
“Sure.”
Lightpaw poked her head into the den’s entrance. “Suntail?”
“Yes, Lightpaw?” Suntail asked, looking up from her half-eaten shrew.
“There’s a newcomer here that wants to see you kits. Come on, Angel.”
Angel padded towards Suntail’s line of eyesight. “Hi, Suntail,” Angel said shyly.
“Welcome to BlazeClan,” Suntail said warmly. “I’m afraid the kits are playing outside somewhere. If you see any tumbling balls of fur coming at you, you know its Waterkit and Duckkit.”
Angel smiled. “I’ll keep an eye out for them.”
The duo exited the nursery. “Come on, I’ll show you the elders den.”
At the entrance, Lightpaw spoke. “This is the elders den, where they come to after they’ve served dutifully as a warrior in BlazeClan. Here they spend the rest of their seasons here, providing the Clan with stories and wisdom. Hey, Sagewhisker is in there now. Let’s say hi.”
Lightpaw and Angel padded up towards Sagewhisker. “Hi, Sagewhiker. This is Angel.”
Sagewhisker twitched her whiskers. “My, my, such a beautiful she cat. Are you planning on joining BlazeClan?”
“Only if Mothstar allows me to.”
“That’s sad. Hope you can stay!”
As Lightpaw led Angel around camp, Lightpaw noticed that she became more and more intrigued about Clan life. Clearly, she had never been with compassionate cats.
Crowpelt padded up towards the group. “Lightpaw, I heard you were showing Angel around camp. How do you like BlazeClan, Angel?”
“I think it’s wonderful,” Angel said softly.
“You two can go get some freshkill. Lightpaw, after you eat, we’re going to the training hollow!”
Lightpaw and Angel headed towards to the freshkill pile. Lightpaw picked up a mouse, and Angel selected a mole. They both headed towards the apprentices den to eat.
“What happened to your family?” Lightpaw asked. Seeing Angel’s discomfort, she added, “You don’t have to tell me. I was just curious.”
“No, it’s okay,” Angel responded. She took a breath. “My father was taken by some Flatfaces, and I never heard from him again. My mother died giving birth to me and my other brother, Olive. Later, Olive decided to leave me during the night, so I was by myself the day you found me. As you can see, I’m not a good hunter. Olive was going to teach me, but he never did.”
“Here, every Clanmate is your family,” Lightpaw mewed, trying to cheer her up. “You could be friends with me, my other friend Larktail, and Hawkstorm, and maybe the other apprentices. You’ll be safe here from those Flatfaces, altho
Reply
Brightflower
3/29/2015 02:24:55 am
“Here, every Clanmate is your family,” Lightpaw mewed, trying to cheer her up. “You could be friends with me, my other friend Larktail, and Hawkstorm, and maybe the other apprentices. You’ll be safe here from those Flatfaces, although here, we call them Twolegs.”
Angel smiled a little. “Well, right now you can teach me some Clan terminology while we’re eating.”
Finchwing
2/25/2015 11:58:25 am
Okay, soooooo. I'm going to skip a moon or two ahead into my story.
chapter 18
Finchwing walked through a wrecked camp. He was standing in the center. Sandclan had fallen. Shadefoot and Softnose were gone. Fear took control of most of the cats in Sandclan and one day, they attacked. After the battle Deepstar died with Fallenstar. Harmonyfang died protecting her kits and Finchwing had lived. Only six cats left the camp.
Finchwing sat on the sand. The moon rose over the wreck and cats came out of the shadows. At this point Finchwing knew all the cats that visited him at night in his dreams and nightmeres. He was crazy. "Light, go away," he cried,"All of you just go away." "Finchwing, you are different, you have survived the curse of Fear and a horrible battle against a whole clan, you are not dying," Light said.
"I will die eventually," Finchwing mumbled. "When you do, you will die beyond us," said Wisdom. Finchwing walked away from the dead cats and into the medicine cat den. He picked up some berries and ate them. He had done that for many days. The poison had done nothing. "If he does," Despair choked, "He will be destroyed and he will not exist at all even beyond us."
For an instant Finchwing wasn't him. He became brighter then dimmer. His pelt switched from fire red to ice blue to leaf green to a pale sickening yellow. He became bigger then smaller then tiny. He became different shapes. Then he returned to his original form. There was light fear, death, betrayal, despair, wisdom, despair, light, shade, and pain, Finchwing was none of those. He was life and he knew it.
TO BE CONTINUED
Reply
Finchwing
3/20/2015 07:19:57 am
chapter 19
Finchwing moved through the bushes. He was heading too the Moon Hollow. The remains of the clans would be there since it was a full moon. When he reached it he was shocked. The other two clans were there.
``Finchwing,`` one said surprised. ``But I thought you were dead,`` said a cat that Finchwing thought was Softpaw. ``Hello`` Finchwing said, ``It is me and I`m still alive. You all need to now what is happening. A long time ago there was a great battle between two cats and their clans. They were Firestar and Tigerstar. Tigerstar died and went to the dark forest but returned as a ghost. Firestar killed Tigerstar but Spotteleaf died as well. She was in starclan. She became Light. Tigerstar became Fear and other starclan and dark forest cats died became something more than starclan. A few moons ago Fear came to Searblaze in a dream and cursed him with a short temper and I killed Searblaze. When it happened to Rimflow and Marsshfur and rats attacked my clan split apart. Then Feaar reached Sandclan and it fell. I`ve spent a moon with dead cats that aren`t Starclan and I`ve learned that Coalwhisker was wrong, I am not a normal cat.`` ``I`m sorry,`` apologized Coalwhisker, ``I just didn`t want you to be scared because you were only 6 moons old.`` ``It`s okay,`` Finchwing said.
``How is this possible,`` a voice said out of nowhere. Light, Wisdom, Despair, Shade and Pain appeared. other cats came out of nowhere and Finchwing knew they were Starclan cats and that they had yelled. ``You lied Spottedleaf,`` a fiery red warrior said angrily. ``I did not lie they did,`` Liht said pointing at the oldest looking cats, ``Thunderstar, Shadowstar, Windstar, and Riverstar.``
``WHY,`` the fiery warrior yeled, ``WHY, I fought Tigerstar over and over for you Spottedleaf and you lied to me, he is still alive and all these cats are in danger because of you!`` ``Firestar I`m guessing,`` said Finchwing, ``I know you kept fighting for Light... or Spottedleaf but know is not the time to be angry. All of us need to work together to defeat Tigerstar or... Fear.``
``I know that but I just can`t believe these lie are going to end the clans,`` Firestar said. ``You are right but now there will be one clan led by the three prophesized to do so. Us three,`` said Finchwing
chapter 20
``NO,`` shouted Fear as he watched the conversation between Light, Firestar, and Finchwing, ``they`re working together, I fear the end is near for me. Who shoud I take control of now.... I know how about you.`` He pointed at Shadepaw.
When Firestar had agreed to work together the three leaders went up to the top of the hollow to discuss how they were going to work together. But below them they heard yells of anger. The rats were back. When they went to check what was happening they saw an ocean of rats around them.
``Go,`` Firestar said before leaping out to fight. Finchwing followed then finally Light. In minutes the rats had fled from the cats. most of the living cats were now starclan cats and only a few remained. Finchwin looked around and remembered there were more catsat the clan camps. The clan leaders and medicine cats got up and started tending to the wounded well others grieved of the other cats deaths. Finchwing knew at that moment barely any cats would survive this war.
Reply
Honeystar
5/19/2015 05:57:20 am
(( WHY IS NO ONE ON ANYMORE?!?!?!? ))
*Crossover fanfiction*
Look, I didn't want to be a semi-god (Part cat and part cat), but once I knew what I was it was too late to pretend that everything was normal.
I lived with my brother, Flint, my sister, Posey, and my mother, Violet. There was only four of us but we scrapped by hunting by day and sleeping in an abandoned den of the no-hairs. The other local cats left us alone and we in turn ignored them.
(This is just a preview more to come)
Reply
Hawkpelt
6/6/2015 03:56:05 am
Hello friends I am back but I am depressed and crying and dying a little inside so just warning you...
I wonder what would happen if warriors sang...
Hmm...
I will be trying to figure that out... I promise I will be getting on again now.... I'm happy to see that you have not abandoned me like the rest of the world... T-T
Reply
Brightflower
6/13/2015 05:46:29 am
I know what it feels like to have no friends, and it still kind of hurts to be depressed. It's hard to have no one to talk to about your feelings, and it may seem that nobody cares. Just know that I care and I can relate to your feelings. You can talk to me anytime.
Reply
Sunpaw
11/3/2021 08:01:42 am
Same here. It really hurts... having no friends. I do not understand why the world has to be so cruel. Nobody ever tries to help you... unless they are one of you. Yet, not even your kind will always try to help you...
This is something I have always felt like doing, but need people's opinions about it.
Here is my idea for me; tell me your opinion please.
I would like to commit suicide. ^^
{Also btw, sorry this is so late! Im new here}
Reply
mintleaf
11/24/2021 07:30:11 pm
i can relate... but also your life has so much left... so please don't. people love you and your great.
Reply
Lynxpaw
7/9/2022 09:15:55 am
Hello, this is set in VenomClan, a Clan that I made up with my friend who also reads the Warriors series.
Lynxkit opened her eyes on darkness. Nothing but endless, pitch-black darkness. At first she thought she was dreaming, but a heavy weight on her brought her to her full senses.
"Hey, get off me!" Lynxkit mewed, shaking off the furry body.
"Mum, look at Lynxkit's eyes!" a high-pitched voice mewed. "They're all blue!"
"Shh!" Pantherfrost's sharp meow rang out. "She's probably still sleeping."
Lynxkit stood up and shook out her pelt. "No, I'm not," she mewed angrily. "I'm very much awake." Then she realised she couldn't see any of the cats who had spoken. "Is it night?"
"No." Pantherfrost sounded surprised. "Why'd you ask that? Isn't it obvious?"
"The only thing I can see is black," Lynxkit grumbled.
"It's day, mouse-brain!" her littermate squeaked.
"Then... why can't I... see?" she wondered aloud. Then suddenly it came to her.
"Am I... blind?"
Reply
Jaybreeze
10/7/2022 11:21:57 am
hello! this story is in a clan called shimmer clan a clan i made up. so enjoy!
jaybreeze's sat quietly at shimmerclans entrance.. she was at her silent vigil. " when is it going to be day.." she thought yawning .
suddenly a heavy weight hit her. "H-HEY, GET OFF ME YOU MOUSBRAIN!" she shouted as she suddenly got thrown against a tree. her vision went black... (HAH CLIFFHANGER)
'To honor the death of Sparkstar' the rest of what Milkwillow said was cut off by Swankits thoughts- when will she get her name?.
'Swankit pay attention!' growled prickleheart glaring at her until Swankit turned away. Suddenly a low growl sounded from a nearby bush and the putrid scent of fox filled the air.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Reply
silvermoon
3/8/2023 03:11:16 pm
Beechwing slid out of the den, they won't notice i'm gone.
He crept to the Moonclan border, ' you look like a the most gai she-cat that ever lived' he smiled at Gaiheart.( PS: Gai means GAY!)
TO BE CONTINUED........GAI
Reply
Wrenflight
5/2/2023 02:51:19 pm
The moon reflected on the cold lake as Hollyleaf limped toward the tunnels.
I hid there once.. I can do it again right? She felt the cold breeze on her ruffled pelt.
fanfic beginning about if Hollyleaf survived!!!!
Reply
Leave a Reply.
What is fanfic?
It stands for fanfiction, which is when you make up a story about something that already exists. Here is where you write stories about warriors!